| Reviews for Broken Spirit |
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   calicokitty111 chapter 2 . 8/9 honestly, if I was discord and wanted to cause as much chaos, then I would have used manipulative guilt. while your current scene is brilliantly written, it lacked the omph that it could have had. if you ever rewrite or edit this, make him say something like "oh, just leave me in the everfree to die already. it would do everyone some good." fuck with everyone, including Celestia without looking like the bad guy. |
| MagicornIs1 chapter 13 . 6/12/2016 I RECONIZE THOSE LYRICS ANYWHERE! |
| Constantine of N chapter 1 . 10/27/2015 Okay. Okay. I approve. |
| TheEnder515 chapter 3 . 10/27/2015 FIRST! Ha! |
| Keri Ruffin chapter 2 . 10/27/2015 very lovely |
| Joyce Bauer chapter 1 . 10/27/2015 hmmm |
| Mehmet Serhan chapter 5 . 10/19/2015 Mehmet Serhan |
| Mehmet Serhan chapter 4 . 10/19/2015 thank you for letting everyone to see it without asking any profit from it |
| Ryan Pugh chapter 3 . 10/19/2015 This was story telling at its finest |
| Isaiah Murphy chapter 2 . 10/19/2015 My favorite |
| viceog4life chapter 1 . 10/19/2015 this story makes me want to cry |
| I'm hooked n chapter 2 . 10/19/2015 I'm hooked ;n;b |
| UndeadPirate89 chapter 1 . 10/19/2015 I'm hooked ;n; |
| Sam Fraser chapter 1 . 10/6/2015 We had no idea what we were starting. The first pebble in an avalanche of fan art, fanfiction, cosplaying, fandom, shippings, pairings… We started a legacy, whoever any of us are. Live on our FIM childhood… Forever... |
| bldude2 chapter 2 . 9/12/2015 lol |
