| Reviews for All Things Probable IV: Graduation |
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Slayer chapter 27 . 16h Well, you said you were going to try to give Grimm some kind of lesson, but the fact is, you were still merciful to him, he deserved something else. It looks like The Probables' reign of terror is going to continue in the DOD, and I'm going to say the following in the CM Punk way: "I'd like to think the DOD will be better off when Grimm's father retires but the fact remains that That position will be vacant and will remain vacant when filled by idiot Grimm and stupid Rhonda and the rest of his stupid family. " |
Guest chapter 27 . 4/11 Wow... I can’t believe that this is the end. The first thing I want to say is that I truly enjoyed your series. It is unlike any fanfic I have read before and the drawings you did for most of the series were flawless. I an sad to see it end here, but I understand your point. So many good series overdue it and then it ruins the magic of that serie. Maybe you will post some more in the future and if that is I will gladly read it but for now I can only say adieu and thank you for this amazing journey It was one heck of a ride. |
Eddy13 chapter 27 . 4/10 Well, that wasn't the way I was expecting the series to end. Still, not bad. I was hoping to see one last scene of Kim and Ron following their canon final scene, but I guess you had your own way of doing it. Really a shame that the series is over. Hope you'll come back to it one day. We'll be waiting for you! See ya around, Slyrr! |
Danilinho Ramrez chapter 27 . 4/9 When you asked the first time that team had won, I replied that everyone was less than Grimm and had told him that the reason was because he bought everyone and everything, and used them too. But now Grimm could see that not everything is solved with money, and this time he knew what it is to fight for something, and that's why he joins the row of winners. I knew that somehow Team Possible was going to win, as you said, they helped Team Probable come out of the shadows. But in the end everyone changed: Kim was able to discover a new way to help people without breaking her ideals, Ron did what he does best, help everyone even when those people treated him badly, Rhonda had to let go of Grimm and grow on her own and Grimm had to put aside his ego, his arrogance and ambition (although he is still a beach son) but all with the same purpose, to do what is right. Despite the fact that I was left with the desire for a Real Final Battle and a little more karma for Grimm, and despite the fact that they renew their contract with the slut they have as a lawyer and, in general, a very good job. Good luck in your next projects. |
CajunBear73 chapter 27 . 4/9 One door closed, another is about to open and I think it would be for bigger and better things, with them all. Rhonda's more comfortable with her Bear Powers and is going to flourish at Grimm's side, won't she? Grimm, really had a very narrow outlook to his future, post-high school, didn't he? Between the two of them, with Rueful, Grimm and Rhonda will go where Grimm wanted to avoid, while Rhonda had no idea of such as it wasn't really considered until this fracas was at an end. After going through what Grimm tried desperately to avoid, he may find this was the best way to get into the pipeline for a future he wanted after all. But with his Mystically Powered Girlfriend every step of the way. The future you skimmed through sounds like one that will be bright for them and a perpetual thorn in Kim's side...Maybe the redhead needs to take a page from Ron's book and let it slide... Thanks for the ride! CB73 |
Danilinho Ramrez chapter 26 . 4/2 as Ironman would say: Part of the journey is the end. The story goes much more than well for the real ending, but while 'A Friend In Darkness' was the true evolution of Team Possible, 'All Things Probable IV: Graduation' was the true evolution of Team Probable; And if, as Grimm's uncle said, recovering from the invasion can take years considering it was all over the world even in Riddlenton. But now the questions are: Will Team Possible and Team Probable face each other in the next chapter? Will Kim and Ron have something in store for Grimm and Rhonda to look the same, assuming they figured out the trick they did to get them back together? Will there be more karma for Grimm? How will the latest trick up the sleeve that the Lowardians have left be discovered? And which team will be the undisputed winner? I recently sent him a PM to see. I invite you to view my profile and review the stories I'm working on. |
CajunBear73 chapter 26 . 4/2 In the dust of the Invaders returning to their home world, many groups-factions, took their moments and then considered their futures. From Grimm and Rhonda, Kim and Ron, the Villains who were no longer Villains (well Fist is another story with DNAmy...) and Sheldon in his new role, Drakken and Shego, they get their pauses before their next steps are contemplated and taken. Potential for brighter futures, shaded slightly with the knowledge of those who know who invaded and who could come again, are everywhere. Relationships damaged in the run up to the Invasion are healing and time will tell where they go. And you know what will come of them...Don't you? LOL! CB73 |
Eddy13 chapter 26 . 4/1 Well, didn't expect everyone to whitewash over what happened with the aliens. I thought this would be going the route of many other stories where Earth was now aware that there was life on other worlds. Still, not bad with all the loose ends you've been mentioning, while also keeping Drakken's "It was a Tuesday" story secret. I was expecting you to put more focus on the destroyed Possible homestead and Team Probable's reaction to Ron's MMP, but I guess it's not really something major to dwell on. What is major is those bombs the Lorwardians mentioned having planted. Is Team Possible and Team Probable going to have one more team-up in order to save what remains of the planet, or are you just mentioning something that's already been dealt with? In any case, looking forward to the next couple of chapters, and I'm really sorry to see this series end. |
Danilinho Ramrez chapter 17 . 3/28 Just one question, How is it that the Great Bear allowed Rhonda to use her powers for her mercenary work and to confront the Team Possible if she did not continue supporting her for the beginning of the invasion? could you explain me |
Slayer chapter 25 . 2/29 I must tell you that this is the only story in which I enjoyed the moments of the Team Probable since it was here the real confrontation for them, since if they continued with that concept that everything is rosy for them they would be another example of toxic realizations . Of course there were moments that in my opinion were a lot of duty, such as the very rapid reconciliation of Grimm and Rhonda, that although part of the situation merited it, I think it took a little longer before reaching that part I expected Kim and Ron to do something to "stay the same" as Grimm would say); I mean, in the case of Rhonda that she started to believe in herself and that at the time of the invasion she couldn't do anything for the increase of Grimm (I mean, if Ron believed in himself and achieved things that many people including Kim thought that I would not achieve it, he proved to be able to achieve it both in your stories and other fanfic as in the original series), another thing more related to Rhonda is about the Great Bear, who overlaid it when he used the powers to face Team Possible and that when faced the invasion did not do the same but told him to do his part to fight in his first good cause (a similar concept used by the Power Rangers Jungle Fury) that on the one hand is fine and on the other makes you ask! WHY DID YOU NOT DO THAT SINCE THE MOMENT THAT GOT BEAR POWER?!; Beyond that, Rhonda had a better development since A Friend In Darkness. Now speaking of Grimm, as you said, it was the only way he would stop being the cocky guy, kick, mouth and piece of garbage he was, since he always got used to being the MVP, the one who always gave the orders if or yes, the one who was used to everyone begging him to help them (or rather to kiss his ass); but all that ended in this story, first his fellow RHS stop begging Grimm, then he loses his lawyer's support, and finally he loses his team and that was totally his fault since he did not want to leave the role of mercenary and to embrace for the first time the role of antihero and everything because there would be no reward (that by the way, if he would sell his own family for money, it wouldn't surprise me at all), that almost cost his only real friends because from me point of view, outside of Rhonda and Jade, Grimm has no friends, but kisses butts; Another thing that bothered me about Grimm is that he always found a way out, whether for his lawyer, for his secret city, for his bought friendships, or for the people who made them favors, he always got his way and although he still you were still protecting it (which personally did not seem fair), now it is much less than it was before and I do not say that sooner or later the day of judgment will fall on Grimm, if it is not that I have already arrived, but I do have to describe in a sentence all this lesson that Grimm resisted: "You can't always get away with it." Another thing that motivates me of Grimm is his loose mouth, although it was the cause of several of his conflicts I never liked that quality of him and I expected someone to shut his mouth once and for all. Although, I must admit that I enjoyed the moments of conflict that Grimm had, as well as the few moments of karma that he had, and the break with Rhonda, and although I didn't feel sorry for Grimm I felt sorry for Rhonda since she feels abandoned by the person who believed he believed in her. but out of all that I feel that Grimm did not even have true warning and all that had to happen was very little for him, although you compensate him with the final development of the character and I think Rhonda had a better development than Grimm. Another character I want to talk to is close to Grimm's father, perhaps the main reason why Grimm is a bastard son of ... beach; One of the reasons I hate Grimm's parents especially his dad is because he learned to be a manipulator from him to use that loose mouth of his, which looked great in the conversation they had these two after Green He had a kind of karma, I think that is the result of stopping an equally bastard father. But when he heard how his nephew was referring to Grimm saying he was helping villains for money and making him as criminal as they were (which is true), he led him to reflect many things, how the fact that sometimes the government needs help Organized crime or mercenaries to do dirty work, something that also happens in real life, but in the long run the government turns back kisses of these, tolerating everything they do and that is what you are going through with GJ. and the DOD and made him wonder if he would become those nasty mercenaries, man, Grimm was already one of those nasty mercenaries, those who are always hated and never respected and who could not only give villain information to the DOD, but also it would be possible to pass DOD information to the villains, of course it is very exaggerated to think that he would become the next Crossbones or the next Taskmaster but it would be even more dangerous than before, I think that was the main reason for having his first talk from man to man and, maybe if first talk from father and son after the breakup of Grimm and Rhonda. PS: I hope that in the next chapter Kim and Ron can do something for Team Probable to return the favor, if you know what I mean. |
Danilinho Ramrez chapter 4 . 2/28 Mr. Slyrr, when will the next chapter of All Things Probable IV: Graduation come out? P.S. I don't know if after the next chapter there will be some epilogue, but if so, I expected Kim and Ron to plot something for Grimm and Rhonda to somehow "return the favor" |
Slyrr chapter 25 . 2/19 Many thanks to the guest reviewers as well as the member reviewers! Your kind words were heard, and I wish FFNET would allow me to respond directly to those who haven't got an account! Hopefully you'll all find the wrap-up to be just as good as the climax! |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/19 Loved the story! Now we're just waiting for the wrap-up. I love the personal growth of your so interesting, organic, and funny characters: Rhonda finding her own way, becoming good and striving for independence, while Grimm is stuck in a more and more jarringly out-of-place mindset in his changing environment. As time goes on and he acts and thinks just like he did before, we see he has his priorities all wrong, that he's focused on things that don't matter, increasingly out of touch with reality over stupid, immature notions. My, was it satisfying and cathartic to see him finally break, realize what really matters and become a better person. Aside from the fulfilling touching moments, redemptions and sacrifices, a fun expansion of the world in a believable and intelligent way, and ridiculous Lorwardian names for dangerous Lorwardian villains, you actually wrote a tense fight scene I enjoyed reading (Grimm vs Poxorza), which I must say is a rare find for me. Setting it to "I'm Me" from Phineas and Ferb was BRILLIANT. As a big fan of that show, it started playing in my head as soon as I read the first verse. I really like the whole idea of the lower deck episode, or the Rosencrantz and Guildenstern-style plot. You do it masterfully, seamlessly joining your expansion with the original to added value for both of them (I went "oooh, that makes so much sense" at the scene where Warhok and Warmonga crush Kim's house, only to not find her there, and Maze having to go to her website... Also the final epilogue scenes in A Friend In Darkness had me rolling with laughter - the "center cannot hold" TV joke was incredible). On a more general note, I must say I only recently realized that the word Rhonda's name is a pun on is "INDEfatigable", not INfatigable (English isn't my first language). And after having read your previous stories, like, 4 years ago. Man, I'm slow. Now that I see the point... Grimm Probable AND Rhonda Fatigable. Genius! Those were logically the only names (formerly) evil opposites of Kim Possible and Ron Stoppable could have had. The amazing thing about the whole All Things Probable Series is how true it is to the original, yet also original by itself in a way that perfectly complements the show, while totally depending on it. That's what makes a work of fanfiction worthwhile: it must be inseparably, essentially linked to the original; otherwise it could have been its own story. You struck that golden spot where you don't write against the show, but fully embrace it and add to it, using all of it faithfully, to the joy of your readers who like the show and recognize it in your writing. That's what fanfiction is all about: loving the original and celebrating it. All things considered, I'd say your work is the definite Kim Possible fanfiction. All the years of working on it have been well worth it - it'll go down in history as a KP fandom classic. Well done! |
Guest chapter 25 . 2/8 Awww this amazing piece of art is coming to an end. If you don’t have planes to continue writing more pieces about them about past missions, Grimms time at Yamanouchi etc could you include in the epilogues the future like when they are adults and have children? Please |
Danilinho Ramrez chapter 25 . 2/1 well, this is the second time that Grimm's head games worked for something good, I say it's the second time since the first time was to reconcile Kim and Ron; Kim certainly said that this is not over yet, something tells me that she discovered Grimm's trick, if so, the final duel will become interesting. I've also wondered what Kim's role he would have to play for the Great Bear, I hope you can put it in the next chapter, and something else; I hope that Grimm in the future can do something that really says "he did the right thing in doing so", since his "donations" are always always to look good with others (not to say that he buys the solutions) and that he can see the change and realize that he did it with sacrifice without waiting for a reward, which benefits everyone even if it does not benefit him, something in which he did not have to buy anything. As always, good work and we look forward to the next chapter soon. PD: finally the final battle will be on its way. |