Not bad. ;)

beautifull, this should not have ended, the story should continue to see their relationship growing and evolving, living togheter and married, with kids etc... forever in love.

Even with the super sweet cliches this was a great read.

I enjoyed the story and was really glad to see it as there is way not enough fiction in this fandom. I thought you captured the cliches well and the way you used the rain took it beyond cliche. I must admit I think that Bo was a bit OOC with as much crying as he did, but it fit in with your theme. I think the only critique I had is that your Jimmy voice is a bit off. Otherwise, nice effort; thanks. Sorry your site shut down before you saw if you won.

Loved it! I really like how you wrote everything out and had details and descriptions. :-) Your grammar and spelling- yet another plus for this story!

nice! i like the mental picture of bo sitting in the rain crying.