Well I can't wait till I can get back on my own computer and log onto my account. I will be favoriting, following, and going back and commenting on every chapter as soon as possible.

please, continue :(

I'm sorry you had to end this. Whatever problem you have I just wish you the best, and hopefully you recover really well from it. Not many stories have made me feel so much emotions as much as this. I understand if you don't wish to go on with this story, I just hope your current experience won't stop you from writing cause' your work's a masterpiece. Best regards xoxo

Sorry to see this one go. I understand. You wrote for a reason, an the reasons gone. Takes away the motivation to write. I do think your a good writer, and hope you fin something to motivate you to write again. Not this, of course, but something. Now g out an find something to love, smile, and feel the sunshine on your skin. (assuming the sun shines where you are.) Love will find you, in one way or another, and you will wake up, smile, and annoy everyone around you with your positive attitude. Until then, breath, smile, and see that life is meant to be enjoyed, if only the small stuff. So goodby, and lets hope you find something happy to write about.

Sorry to hear about that, and I thank you for an awesome Jori story. Do you plan on writing any other Jori stories, or are you done with writing? At least for now? And feel free to PM me if you want to or something.

There's that word again. "Heavy." Why are things so heavy in the future? Is there a problem with the Earth's gravitational pull?

Please! Don't end the story like this, all of the bad things about this story can go away with one chapter so please make this a jori love story.

Even though you didn't have much inspiration for this chapter, I fully enjoyed it honestly. It flowed with the rest of the story and didn't feel disjointed or anything. I do hope you continue the story but if not, it was fantastic finding this gem. :)

Loved the ending, I think it just shows how hard it is for both of them to stay away from each other. Interested to see what happens next (so I keep reading) ;P.

Really emotional ending there in this chapter... Tori continuously fighting with her own emotions. Good to see Trina may have gotten through to her.

I love the progression of Tori's and Jade's personalities. I didn't expect the story to go like this with Tori becoming a bully. It makes this story very unique and I'm happy to see it isn't even completed yet. I'll definitely be reading this to the end :).

Please continue this! :3 the lastest chapter was great. I really like how you've gotten Jade and Tori's personality down. I can't wait for more! Please & Thank you!

I miss you so much

ugh when's jori gonna be. -pissed off-

Isn't "the click'' supposed to be ''the clique''