You need to fix every single chapter dude, all these grammar errors are really messing up the form of reading this story. Also, reread and apply better grammar, a lot of these chapters don't really make any sense if you don't use proper grammar

This was shit. JK WELL DONE :D

You know at Lightning's final turn Yusei's Theme started blaring from my laptop, I thought it was hilarous, yet fitting.

You know, I was expecting a draw ending, too bad about Diamond Dust.

Of course Draws are hard to pull off. I think I wrote one duel that ended in a draw way back, I spend so much time figuring out the rules and how the chain would work...

I still can't tell what Shiro decided in the end, did he stay?

Awesome story and awesome duel. Can't wait for the squeal to start.

The beginning was really poetic, like the end of a series, but somewhere along the line you lost me during Lightning and Shiro's duel. Gone was the imagery of the start of the chapter to well the duel.

It possibly might be because it was around 3am when I read it, but I found the flow of the chapter disrupted.

Man, this chapter and duel is getting blood pump up! I can't wait to see how this ends!

And now it comes to an end. In a way I wished Fang and Vanille survived through it all, sparing them from Crystal Slumber.

Now for the traditional battle between friends to end the series.

glad it's finish with happy ending..what happen next i just wish it's still full of joy and happiness...

This has to be the best chapter I have ever read in my whole life, can't wait to see what the next 2 chapter are going to be.

I don't know how I feel about this chapter... maybe because it felt more like filler than content. I'm not really sure...

Anyway... soo that card making contest... well since I'm working on my own story... I do have a card here... but it's Lightning's ace card... (she's running Geminis in my story too)

Now things are starting to get better, an Accel Synchro monster that can finally get rid of those beast. Good job on using Serah for creating Teardust Dragon.

Definitely a throwback to Z-One's final battle with Yusei, I'm assuming we got about two episodes left, don't we?

Oh man, I hope Shiro can pick up a win in this duel. Nice chapter.

Sorry for not reviewing the last three chapters, I got distracted with 13-2 and a final run of Mass Effect 2 the last couple weeks.

I see we're coming to an end, or are you gonna tumble straight into 13-2 right afterwards as another major arc?

I'm still planning out my take on a 5D's crossover. Making up new cards is hard... I'm really tempted to take an easy way out and reface a buncha cards.

Holy cow, two powerful synchro monsters on the first turn, Shiro better get his game on. Pretty cool chapter.