Reviews for Caught In The Fray
Eli Clark chapter 17 . 2/5/2018
Is the Vindice still after their asses? Honestly, I think the Vindice has themselves to blame. They were swept away like everyone else, hating the magical community for stealing something when they didn't steal shit.
Eli Clark chapter 1 . 2/5/2018
The Mist Flame is not purple, it is indigo! Just wanted to point that out, since it said Mukuro disappeared and left behind purple mist. The purple Flame is the Cloud Flame.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/21/2016
Its utterly stupid how Dumbledore and Nonno didn't tell them about their own allies... i mean what if they wont listen to harry and they killed each other there and then?
I-AM-A-SUPER-SADIST chapter 17 . 1/24/2016
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Ann chapter 17 . 4/14/2015
Uh oh. Harry's temper reared it's head. Though I would be angry too.
Nice display be tsuna and guardians hibari the great hall! Loved it! Vindice doesn't take orders from anyone and will act somewhat ignorant of umbridge's hidden mission. I think umbridge might now realize that she can't butter up or manipulate the "Mafia police". Lol. Can't wait for more! Also, I lived gokudera, yamamoto and ryohei as cats! Very smart!
Ann chapter 16 . 4/13/2015
Awesome! So the boss and his guardians will all be in Hogwarts shortly. Good thing mukuro mentioned the dementers. And so casually too! Lambo's flame use has reassured the 'home front's of the Family's well-being, so I guess that's good. Hopefully Vindice didn't notice. Cool. I look forward to the 'Vindice' being at Hogwarts and how everything goes down!
Ann chapter 7 . 4/6/2015
Holy crap. Wanted?! That's not good! More and more obstacles are getting in the way of the cooperation between Tsuna and the wizards. Omg.
Lol, the Order is suspicious if mukuro. And even hibari fellow Vongola are suspicious. He's too good at being the bad guy.
Ann chapter 5 . 4/1/2015
Lol, everyone is misinterpreting the situation with yamamoto.
GR chapter 15 . 3/5/2015
grammar mistake detected, it is this guop not these group, gruop is singularif you use these, it should be these groupS
like the last sentece of Lambo
creativesm75 chapter 17 . 12/20/2014
interesting
CloudCarnivore chapter 17 . 8/19/2014
I hope for more chapters soon! :) *_
Soul of The World chapter 17 . 8/18/2014
*:.。. o()o .。.:* I am so enjoying the story!
booklover1209 chapter 17 . 8/16/2014
This chapter was great. Thanks for updating. Oh, and I like the sound of that new story. Update soon!
Magical-Tear chapter 17 . 8/16/2014
That's another chapter done! I'm really sorry the past month was full or late replies, that Overview class really took its toll on me *Sighs* English Composition is doing much better though, so hopefully next chapter won't take as long to edit However, I did notice that the website took out a few spaces and comas here and there, because I don't remember any of these errors being in the last draft we proofread. Oh! And I think I also saw one word in a dialogue that remained from one of the comments I left for you XD You can go back and check those little things I noticed or you can just leave them be. I still find it weird that the site would just delete some spacing like that...how weird! XD

Anyways! Excellent job once again my dear friend! It's always an honor to work with you Let's hope school gives us a break next time!
booklover1209 chapter 16 . 7/14/2014
I love this story so much. Character interactions are great so keep up the good work! Update soon!
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