This is brilliant! Please update soon!

I love this story please update, i need to know who got shot

if you have the time/desire, more would be appreciated!

The diary is genious xD
Ill look forward to reading more :3

The story improved a lot! The edit you made really paid :)

I hope you don't abandon this. It's very interesting and fun to read. I like Lavi's character, too, and how everyone seems to know better than him. You left me dangling there with your cruel cliff-hanger, so make sure you write another chapter, huh? :D I look forward to the following events!

This fic was one of the few that caught my eye as I scrolled through the list - and the only one that I read. I must say this was a good find! The DGM fandom has become rather unreadable recently, and I'm glad there are still writers like you (:

This fic is generally well-written, imo. A few stylistic errors here and there but nothing serious that would detract from the enjoyment of reading this. I love the plot and doubtlessly this will turn out to be quite magnificent in terms of characterization as well.

Besides - your writing style is humorous and just lovely!

Do update soon (:

This is a fun story. The title and summary intrigued me, and the story itself is really good. I can't for you to update again! _ But, I have one question, and I don't mean to sound mean or rude about it. Is English your first language? If it is, I apologise, it's just that some of your word placements seem off. Everything makes sense though.

Please update soon~! _

This story is quite interesting. I actually quite like it. The fact that its from Lavi's perspective is pretty interesting and different from most stories. Please keep writing and update real soon. By the way, I also prefer Kanda as seme. He seems so hot that way *blushes*. Plus, he doesn't seem like one to be bottom.

Haha Trigger Happy Allen and smiling while pointing a gun at someone! Loved it XD

when i first saw the title, i was like "what could this story possibly be about?" lol its deceptive!

i really do like it. 'nice' messiah allen and sharp kanda, and ace sleuth lavi. good length too, nice meaty chapters. please update soon

HOLLY TIMCAMPY! ALLEN SHOT! TRIGGER-HAPPY ALLEN SHOT!

OMG awsome update ;D I WANNA KNOW WHAT KANDA AND ALLEN ARE AND WHAT THEIR DOING D: the f man ._. poor Lavi being left out of the loop lol and oMG my last name is Glock xD haha i find that funny o3o anyway please update soon your story is like totaly awsome x) but one more thing before i go... Kanda is the seme right o3o i just hate Allen seme .3.

The narrative is quite good. I enjoyed reading this. The characters (interactions, reactions, lines, etc.) were done well enough. Everything could be better, though. I suggest a Beta-Reader.

Over all, it was a nice chapter. I look forward to the next one

Loved. It.

You have amazing handwriting! And I can't wait to find out what happens next XD

ITS SOOOOOO GOOD! PLZ UPDATE AGAIN SOON!