One word sequel

Hoe mah gawd that was one of the most descriptive sex scenes I have ever read. If I can remember the name of one soon then I will send it to you and you should read that one just for some inspiration so getting down and dirty can be more down and dirty (finger to the chin and innocent face) thanks again it was awesome

Perf

HOLY FUCK BABE.
I feel so jealous and horny and gah all at the same time.
Bleh Bleh Bleh!
Its amazing. So amazing.
Like better than Stolen Treasure amazing. God your good.

FAN!

Wow, that was an excellent lemon! I rarely read sex that is that well written. Kudos!

This story is awesome. Demyx and the others are going to be either traumatized with the loud moans and screams, or very much turned on, I'm thinking Option Number 2.

Why have I not read this until now O/O

Like...holy fuck...just let me go fap, I'll be right back.

OMG this story was awesome! OK, I write alot of fanfic myself and let my friends read it, and they say its great. but I think you write a helluva lot better than me! You sooo inspired me to write some more Akuroku stuff. ( This turned me on. LOL, creepy, right!)

Lol I know how u feel I wanted to celebrate with my kh crazy buddy but I was out of state it was horrible D: but this story was funny hah

OMG this was fucking amazing never read a camp story befor.

I am telling you this my face is reder then Axel's hair and interesting fact first story i have revewed in years! my computer was jacked and would not let me reveiw and the font was werid tell the fanfiction world Naruta 15 is back and again FUCKING AMAZIN!

Once again, an excellent story! My only thing for critique here is spelling mistakes. You seem to have a lot in this chapter. Not so much words spelled incorrectly, more that the word is incorrect for the sentence it is in, like a spellcheck tried to fix it and put in a different word.

BUT OTHERWISE YEAH, YOU'RE AWESOME -thumbs up-

Something for the future: I'd love to see you write a loving fic, where the characters take the sex nice and slow. Most, if not all, of the fanfictions I have read of yours have been fast and hard sex, so I'd love to see some fluffy sex rofl.

There's nothing wrong with hard sex though, just sayin' :D

I danced a bit in my seat when i saw the alert for this in my inbox lol! Oh madam crimson, you have made me a very happy minion! I love when roxas tops while bottoming! This was uber smexy! Can i hug you, cuz this totally deserved a hug *hugs* lol. I cant wait for watever you post next

You loyal minion

Pyro13

oh god that was totally sexy, good job!

I love it! XD