Awsome... just as simply as that! I've never thought of it that way... but i think that you have a point there...

I hope you understand what i mean...

Wow. That was amazing. I really liked te story. The people caught in the reincarnation cycle are: Clay, Hiead's repairer I can't remember her name), Erts, Kizna, Roose, and Yamagi. Do I get a cookie?

this is awesome. you're right, there are way too many romance-centered fics here (i'm guilty -_-...but hopefully when i one day come around to reading the manga, that'll change) and you've certainly graced the MK section of with this piece. as completely and wonderfully original this idea is, IT MAKES SENSE...and that's what i love about this story (not to mention the writing, the subtle character-analysis, etc etc etc).

That was wonderful. Really, it was. I love that it's so deep, and I love how it all went through. The words were so wonderfully played out onto the page! I'm running out of good things to say.. That was wonderful, Kay-san.

this is who I think you mentioned: Clay, Ikny, Erts, Kizna, Zero, and Hiead.

Me likes the concept! It's really great, and the writing is just...is just...fantastic! It's so well written, I enjoyed it (I almost pushed the back button where I read the part about 'if you're stupid, go back, but I'm glad I didn't, maybe I'm not stupid after all! Wai!)

Loved it...so introspective and good...

Very interesting. Kuro's always been an interesting guy, I'm glad someone's finally written about him, and written well. I also like your ideas about Hiead's and Zero's relationship. The more I think about it, the more it makes sense. Hmm. Speculation aside, you also have a very nice writing style and capture the interaction between the two very well-a little more romantic than what I've picked up (but then again, I've only the dub and websites to go by for now) but it works well. I hope you keep writing about the minor characters. You're really good at creating unusual stories.

-Val

_ Very interesting. More surreal in its way then I would have expected. I like the theory behind this and would be very interested to see it explored further. Do I possibly sense past-life fics on the horizon? *tingles in hopeful anticipation*

A nice stand-alone fic, with plenty of room to be expanded on.

And it was well outside of the disturbing category until Teela laughed... *shudders*

I won't bother listing them. I'm not into cookies. I can place my finger on a few, but the rest are a bit more vague. Great concept, with characters that no one really writes about a lot! And at least it explains the Kuro thing. XD I think this is highly possible, actually.

I loved your story! It really got me thinking.

Sysygy - the nearly straight-line configuration of three celestial bodies

in a gravitational system

Yay! I'm first reviewer!

For starters, that word "Syzygy", is perhaps the coolest word ever. Second, this fic is awesome. The whole Teela and Kuro thing is just... well... I never, ever thought of it that way before. I mean, I know Teela's in love with that person, or something like that, but to think... reincarnation and brothers and hereditary linkage... It was all incredibly thought provoking and deep. Incredible, excellent stuff.

Hrn. I guess I still have much to learn, neh?