| Reviews for Ensnared by Despair |
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Guest chapter 19 . 12/11/2019 I know I haven’t finished reading this, but your story is pretty disappointing already. I thought i was going to read faberry, but no, this is more like Quinn-centric with side faberry and I wouldn’t have been annoyed as much if you cleared this in the summary. (: and frankly, I hated how you twisted Rachel’s character for Quinn’s favor. Like how you normalized Rachel’s borderline co-dependance to Quinn where when it was Quinn, she made her go through hell and broke up with her without giving her the explanation she DESERVED. I get it, she was scared and unhappy and blah blah blah.. it still doesn’t give you a right to treat people like dirt to toss them away. Idk, am I leaving this too early? Because I certainly don’t feel comfortable with how everything escalated so fast in chapter 8. Either your Rachel character is really dumb, or she just never really cared enough to self-reflect on her relationship with Quinn. their current relationship to me seems pretty unjust and frustrating and i keep expecting it to turn toxic from the way Rachel is too attached, and Quinn emotionally unavailable like you put it in Rachel’s POV and somehow also romanticized it lol. Btw, If anyone is reading my review don’t let this discourage you from reading it is a good story and this is just my personal opinion. Peace out. |
fabrayctrl chapter 36 . 10/4/2019 This was so beautifully written. Thank you so much |
Finalesmith chapter 36 . 9/28/2019 I didn’t read this story for so long (maybe it was the length or the summary didn’t grab me) but I’m so glad I finally gave in. This was excellent! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 I really enjoyed this. I think you did a great job with Rachel. A lot of fics tend to sort of smooth out her worse qualities but I think you left her a little rough around the edges and difficult especially in the first 10 chapters. You also showed her mature through the experience of a healthy sexual/loving relationship where she was able to acknowledge some of her more difficult personality traits but still remain unapologetically true to herself. Well done. |
Icy-Windbreeze chapter 36 . 3/22/2016 It's such an awesome story. Thank for you for writing and sharing! |
jojo.saltzman chapter 36 . 3/18/2016 Beautiful! Thank you! |
jojo.saltzman chapter 31 . 3/17/2016 I love what you did with the whole 'I was ungly' part. I've never read that before and I've always wanted to so thank you so much! :) |
JadeLeeBerry chapter 36 . 11/5/2015 Amazing story! :D |
gllover22 chapter 36 . 8/24/2015 Wow! That was just terrific. Really well done. Your writing always is so wonderful. I hope you keep writing Faberry fics. Always looking forward to more. |
JMoonrise chapter 31 . 8/16/2015 I'm Quinn is realizing she isn't Beth's real mother. While she loves her, Beth has a mom that has cared for since she was born. It isn't fair of Quinn to confuse her. |
JMoonrise chapter 29 . 8/16/2015 I don't know if you know but colleges only receive your transcripts for the first three years when you apply. Your final doesn't go out until the end of the school year. So I don't know if you're just taking liberties or didn't know this wasn't plausible. |
JMoonrise chapter 28 . 8/16/2015 OSU is actually a difficult school to get into just so you know. |
Forevergleek9615 chapter 36 . 8/4/2015 How have I only found this story? When I read the summary, I was a bit hesitant on reading it knowing that it might be quite angsty. However when I read the reviews and the response was quite positive, I thought I'd give it a shot. And you know what? I am so glad I did. This is one of the best stories ever and even though they were broken up, they never gave up on one another. This was quite fluffy, a bit of angst (but the right amount), the drama; the sex was brilliant! I loved this story. |
fangirlmc chapter 1 . 6/18/2015 I can't believe that I just discovered this amazing story a few day ago. Now, I just finished reading the whole thing and I honestly loved it SO much! Thank you for creating such a beatific story! Hoping that you'll write more Faberry fanfics soon :) |
nofcksgiven chapter 36 . 3/25/2015 Aww, it's the end.:( I'm sad that there weren't more on what the Skanks will be up to while Quinn's away but I hope things will be better for them the next time they all meet up. I love how the Berrys and Fabrays were all in one room. I wonder if the parents know that one day they'll all be in-laws.:) Hehe. I'm forever happy that my girls are together and happy. Being apart is gonna be a b but I have no doubt they'll make it through. Thank you for writing this! I love it! |