... ... shit i should have read up the description said romance, but harry ron, really.
Oh well, to late now. And it was soft, and it is not as if i am against it, i mean at first i thought maybe mermaids save, then i thought strong hands, snape... soooo... shrugs.

You stole this scene from Celebony. At least give her some credit if you were going to do an Alternate Ending.

I just got done watching that scene so I decided to look up fanfiction for it. Nice job.

Ok, Hated the start when i started to read it, and now I love it, its perfect!

AWWWWW! SO CUTE! It's more of a protective older brother/scared little brother moment but still really good.

AWWW! your right. Could be a slash, but I think it's kind of a... big/little brother moment.

Oh My Gosh! How come no one has reviewed this story yet! It is fabulous! It was of the best written one-shots I've read and grasped my attention immediatly! Well written and well done!