I like this

I loved this story! I think you did an exhalent job portraying the two vampires. They were just like how they should be! Thank you!

I like the blood play, and although I do believe you ended this story in just the right place, I wouldn’t have mine a nice bloody smut sean!

Nevertheless, it was still amazing. :)

a-amg, my hato- /flails

Wow that was amazing! I could feel them through your wrighting. Truly wonderfull! I cant deside if I like that it was only a one shot tho... It ended so well and gave just enough to teas but still feel complet, but on the other hand i still want more :-( . It was great tho one of my new favorites!

I liked it *o*

Zero x Kaname w

so bloody delicious! I loved the passion in your writting.

DUUUUUUUDE.

amazing.

seriously amazing.

This was really amazing c: I know what you mean about one-shots shaming your longer fics though. I feel the same about my stuff sometimes. They're all the passion and drama wrapped into a small but potent dose C: How can they not be amazing? Anyway, great job!

just perfect

Very well done! It was definitely an emotional tidal wave from Zero's point of view, but you did it well, both as a first person piece and as a story overall.

5000 words? Bah. This didn't need any more than it has. )

So delicious! 8D *is drooling*

You wrote them so well! I so hope you might feel like writing more for Vampire Knight, and perhaps in particular some Zero x Kaname? :D

(Most fics are Kaname x Zero, so Zero x Kaname fans are always dying for some of their beloved pairing... XD; So I can't help but ask when I see good fics with the two. :D)