Vale la pena,pero debe darse una reedicion absoluta,total,realista y al mismo entretenida de este Fanfic

Creo qe la historia resulto decepcionate,muchas de las naves y vehiculos de Halo no aparecen y la miytad del tiempo nos centrsamos en temas que no aportan nada en ninguna rama o espectro para el argumento de la historia,me decepciona enormemente.

Me decepcionan dos principales detalles,el primero radica en que elimines tantos y algunos de los mas iconicos vehiculos del universo de la saga y franquicia de Halo,como el Ghost o el Espectre,quitas y restas variedad con ello,ademas de que tienen grandes capacidades que siguen equilibrando con sus respectivos defectos y hacen poco logica la decision de eliminarlos por completo en vez de mejorar su composicion tecnologica y corregir directamente esos defectos,el segundo error radica en lo corta que es una historia con tanto potencial,a continuacion te describo detalles complementarios para otra historia completamente nueva pero inspirada en esta.

Sagas combinadas que compondrian su universo y contexto dentro del argumento de este Fanfiction.
.Halo
.Star Wars
.Avatar La Leyenda de Korra
.Mass Effect
.Dead Space(Facciones como el Gobierno Colonial Terrestre son predecesores del UEG de Halo)
.Warhammer
.

Facciones existentes dentro del universo y contexto de este Fanfiction.
.Alianza Humano-Covenant/Coalicion
.Republica Galactica
.Gran Ejercito de la Republica
.Fuerzas Unidas
.Republica Unida de Naciones
.Confederacion de Sistemas Independientes
.Necrones
.Tiranidos

Total de capitulos requeridos.
24 Minimo-Unos 36 maximo,por lo menos.

Antagonistas.
.Villanos de la Leyenda de Korra
.Darth Sidious
.Conde Dooku
.Confederacion de Sistemas Independientes(durante su periodo bajo el liderazgo del Conde Dooku)
.Gran Ejercito de la Republica(Bajo la manipulacion de Palpatine,desde el punto de vista de Halo)
.Igualistas

I can see why you abandoned this story, I've only finished the first chapter and I'm already annoyed with it.

There is a strange habit amongst the Halo fanfiction writers to have Humans buddy buddy with the Sangheili or the majority of Covenant species within a few decades of the war. Nonsense. 3 centuries, YES, 30 years NO. It's absurd. There is also a strange habit of forcing the US constitution on the postwar governemnt. Since the UNSC was essentially a military dictatorship during the war, and wasn't very friendly to colonies that stepped out of line I don't think this is feesible. That goes double when you realise that alien species can not fit with such ideas as 'rights'. How would the Yan'me , Huragok, or the Hunters fit into this model. The answer is of course they couldn't. No species alliance is going to realistically involve control over the internal affairs of its member species.

The idea that Humans would submit to Xeno supervision is laughable. Any government, democratic or otherwise that attempted to force submission this way would be immediately overthrown and all the parties involved would be strung up.

Your Huma population numbers are also low. Humanity on Earth alone increased population from 1 to 7 billion in less than 200 years, and that was at the start of the industrial age. The Halo universe consists of hundreds of Human colonies with vastly superior production techniques. Another error is the idea that the Covenant destroy the Outer colonies then the inner colonies, then Earth. Whereas, most colonies would avoid the Covenant all together by the simple fact that they would be on the 'other side' of Earth. Or if you like, away from the Covenant invasion wedge.

I won't go into too much detail about your intro. If the Forerunners could save every species in the galaxy, why couldn't they save their own? Why bother with this medi-chlorian nonsense? If the Forerunners had the ability to travel between galaxies, then they would surely have had colonies outside of their native galaxy, and thus once again what made you think they were extinct.

I don't expect a reply, I know you've essentially abondoned this, but quite a lot bothered me about your opening chapter that I wanted to put to paper.

Um, it takes ten, actually. At least for humans. 20 divided by 2.

Speaking of EMP's, why didn't they detonate a nuke in orbit?

I hope you decide to come back.

i think that you should rename the spartan-class supercarrier as an assault carrier , because the covenant supercarrier during the war were 27 km long , while the assaul carrier were 5 km long

awsomw story i hope you continue it

YES KEEP GOING. This story is beyond awesome and would be such a major pity if it disappeared, just mark it as discontinued if you must :(. But keep it up, this is beyond amazing. I hope you find inspiration soon

SE

Love it.

Love this story... can we get more?

SE

I like this story, this needs more attention. Please update soon.

This is really good suprised there isn't more reviews. Keep up the good work :)

"A revised version of my earlier attempted work. Now Beta reviewed. Updates will happen far less often than probably expected, but chapters will be long I'm shooting for around 8,000-12,000 words per chapter ."

It would be helpful if you actually had a summary that described the plot. For all I know this could be a fic where all the Spartans have gay sex with Jedi.