amazing

couldn't ash and may kiss during the "comfort hug"?

Well the best thing here is the description of breakfast. I'm literally drooling right now.

Such a love square

Pikachu owes blazeiken so much money

Swag bro

Major props to Advance4ever! tho spend days of his/her time is amazing! especially 300,000 words! Can't wait to read the rest of this story!

'Norman got up, closed his eyes and frowned. He then opened his eyes and hugged Ash.' *soghs* Every guys first trial of getting a girlfriend they have to confront the father and get their blasting can't blame the Norman though becuase if that was my daughter I would be a bit overprotective for her safety
*looks at the little Ralts on my lap/chest* yep not until you're old enough little girl

I'm not gonna lie but I did read the sequel by accident but eh so I'm not going to spoil this story for those that not read this yet
But other it is a goo...of *a shiny a normal Umbreon sit on my lap* REALY Nyxe and Elsa
Nyx:Umbre
Elsa: *XP* Glacé glaceon
*rolls eyes * keep up with that sequel bye

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This is probably the best written story I have ever read, both on , or in real life. The story development, cheracter development, and ending especially was the best I have ever read. I even said to myself multiple times "damn, this guy writes amazing" in real life. Can't wait to read the Unova part!
-Stefan aka Bravo_Luigi

Best story . Had my heart in my mouth when ash kissed misty. But it worked out inthe end

I'm happy that ash and May are finally a couple I never really liked drew to begin with I think he's a jerk and to much of a show off may and ash are one of my favorite couples ash makes a better boyfriend for may he knows how to treat her right I know he's dense but he dose have a side to him that knows how to treat a girl like may right and make her happy and keep her safe from danger

This is one of the best advance shipping fanfics I ever read I'm glad u put ash with may I think they make a perfect couple I know may had a crush on drew in the anime but from what I saw I know may loves ash more especially all the times he's helped her mentored her comforted her and even saved her they are so much alike others might agree and disagree but I know ash loves may just as much as she loves him even if he is to dense to realize it but his actions speak for themselves I know there will be a day that she will reunite with ash they both Carrie a half ribbon with contains the memories and experiences that ash and May both shared together in hoenn and kanto as they say the distance makes the heart grow fonder ash and May will always will be my all time main favorite ( advance shipping) forever

I'm pretty sure there's more than one Darkrai and Latios in le pokeworld, oh well