Reviews for Submit a Character! you know you want to
wishingonthestars chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
Thank u so much for choosing her!U made my day! :):):):):):):):):)
sharpiedoodler chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
demigod:full name: Renata Hamelin

nickname: Ren

gender: female

age 13

parents: Zaina Hemelin (mother) and Hermes

siblings: Bailley Hamelin (15) and Liam Hamelin (10)

appearence: Hazel eyes, caramel hair bit below the shoulders, tallish, fair but tan skin

personality: hyper, emotional, oblivious to the fact that many campers dislike her, michivious, pro lier, bubbly, alert, confident

love interest: NEVER! she wants to be a huntress

backstory: came to camp three months back because she was boared. she never saw her mother, Bailley and Liam ignored her. Yawn. so she came to camp

weapons: dagger (its just a dagger like Annabeth but not given form Luke or any thing like that)

powers ?

fatal flaw: shes convinced that everything will work overconfidence

undetermined

extra: ?

animal:

Name: Cunning

animal: leopard

appearences: look up a leopard on google images

she can speak with children of Dionysus

personality: energetic, fiesty, innocent (so far), stealthy, cunning,
OnceInAFullMoon13 chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
Thanks for picking shadow! I think ur story is going to be awesome (Not just because shadow will be somewhere in it.)
gbyefriend chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
Yay~! :D Thanks for picking Rebecca! She wuvs you~! X3
misszayy chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Julietsa Avrilella Deadwell

( the last thing i 4got )

power: her last 2 power is that she can make the sky white,the stars black,and the moon blood red to cut off your senses; and the last one is that she can make a star appear in her hand a you can make a wish. ( if she likes you ).
misszayy chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Julietsa Avrilella Deadwell

( one tthing i forgot )

*im sorry i keep forgetting things... :(

weapon:the bow is black with purple swirls and a sliver handle, while the arrow is sliver it has black swirls while the tips is plum purple. it changes 2 a necklace with a crest moon and a black swirl around it.
Katherine Marie Silver chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
(things i left out)

apperance: hair falls to her waist in soft waves.

weapon: it dissapears into a owl necklace

Determind or not:Determind

likes-death,night,owls,cars,having fun,battleing.

dislikes:daytime,too much light,bugs,and things geting into her hair
misszayy chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Julitsa Avrilella Deadwell

(things i forgot )

wepon: when she strikes u with a arrow u burn inside out

determined: to make her mother proud and to have a quest

apperance: tan skin.
misszayy chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
name: Julietsa Avrilella Deadwell

nickname:Juliet

gender: female

age:15

parnet: Artemis

silbilings (mortals): damon 17

personality: mystrey,a dark person,but can be nice at ,arrogant,and is a will stand up for her friends and a bad stay on her good side. kind of emoish.

apperance: long black hair with purple streaks that fell in ringlets to her eyes with sliver specks like the night a tattoo of music notes from her index finger 2 her wrist circleing a crest moon. has 3 pierceings on her right ear and 2 pierceings on her lips. long black eye face. 411 ft. tall.

love intrest: son of athena

bckstory: grew up in louisanna with her dad ethan and half brother keep getting exspelled from all her school. one day when she was 13 walking from school an emposa grabed her and almost bit a sater saved her and brot her back 2 camp half blood. when she was walking around one of ares kids pushed her and she started to fight her.a arrow appeared aboved her head and everyone said "artemis". so thats how she stayed at camp half blood.

wepon: a black,sliver,and purple bow an arrow name "mid-night"

powers:she can make a stary mist apper in her hand and blow it and it poisens you for 5 secounds and it kills you and she is more stronger when it is a full moon or at night.

determind or un-determined: determined

fatal flaw: she is very secretive

extra: bday-october 31

fav. color-black and purple

style- gothic and punk ( no bright colors )

fav. animal wolfs
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Full Name:Katherine Marie Silver

Nickname:Angel or Kat

Gender:Female

Age:15

parents:Athena

Mortal Siblings:none

Personality:badass,kind hearted,kind to people,bad temper.

Apperance:long black hair with some dyed in red streaks,big gray eyes,tan skin,4'11 ft.,full pink lips,a beautiful body and a tattoo on her arm that is a olive tree with angel below it.

Love insterest:Son of apollo (long term)

Backstory:Katherine was never accepted in her fathers was always to busy with was always alone because she had no she was 10 she was taking a walk in the forest in her backyard,when out of nowhere a hellhound attacked her. she somehow managed to kill it. when she told her dad her told her that she was always special. he packed her some bags and took her to camp half she was in traning a owl appeared above her head and somehow she knew that she was a daughter of athena.

weapon:a sword named angel,hence where she got her nickname from. its a magic sword, given to hes as a present yo her ny ger mother. it helps make her go invisible,makes her apponents weak when hit with it and makes her apponents feel pain with every 's black,gray,& red.

Fatel flaw:she loses controll of her powers when shes mad, and afraid of spiders.

Powers:change the weather,controll the elements & go invisible.

Determined:to go on a quest and maybe meet her mother and make her proud of her.

extra: fav color-black and red

bday- december 13

fav animal-owl (of course)
SetFireToTomorrow chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Full name: Violet Snow

Nickname: Vi, Violent

Gender: female

Age: 14

Parents (no big 3): Deimos (god of fear, terror, and panic) and Angel Snow

Siblings (mortal only): none

Appearance:

Hair (Color/Style/Length): white blonde hair to her hip with long bangs dyed purple and blue, purple, and black streaks in her hair. It's really choppy and layered

Eye Color: left eye dark green, right eye violet

Height: 5'8"

Body Build: athletic with long legs

Skin Tone: tan

Anything Else?: a long scar from her hair line, through her right side of her face, to her chin.

Personality: She's cold and hostile to everyone. Very closed off and likes to be alone. She has anger problems and can blow up at you if you even slightly piss her off. She gets angered easily, but loves to pranks people and make fun of them. Not someone you wanna be best buds with. She's a rebel and goes against what everyone wants her to do. Vi doesn't smile a lot or show emotion, but she does talk and smirk and when she laugh, it's usualy a MAWHAHAHA kinda laugh (she's not evil, just a regular prankster). She's really sarcastic and pretty good at comebacks. She spends time by herself listening to songs (she loves music) or making up ways to kill people she hates. She has a dark stage, when a lot of emotion is stored up in her, she freaks out. Kinda like a violent panic attack. She's really not trusting.

Love interest: ur pick, but can you make it be someone she wouldn't like very much

Backstory: She was at first sent to an orphanage. She had temper problems and bad claustrophobia and was then put in a mental hospital at age 6 because of dreams and panic attacks and anger management. After two weeks, she was attacked by a Hellhound, but some Satyrs that worked at the Asylum saved her.

Weapon: a whip sword (A sword, but if you pulled the blade apart, the blades unlock and is connected with pieces of chains. Look it up!) called εφιάλτης (Efialtis, Nightmare)

What its disguised as: It melts into her arm in the shape of a fancy vine tattoo. The 'tattoo" is a vine that starts on her left middle finger, goes up her arm, down her shoulder blade then up and around her neck. The vine stops around her collar bone. She gets the whip out from her skin by twisting a ring she has on her middle finger.

Powers: she can make people see what they fear most just by looking at them. Can can also make people feel fear and terror.

Fatal flaw: wrath

Determined or undetermined? (as in claimed): determined

Extra:

Likes: pranking, lying, motorcycles, boys, surfing, apples, devils, ruling the world, singing, music, cocky guys, green eyes, thigh high boots, fighting, getting messy,

Dislikes: b*tches, pink, unicorns, cocky guys (Yes, it's in the 'likes' also but she doesn't want to admit it to herself), red hair, blonde haired blue eyed people, liars, cheaters, backstabbers, plants, growing stuff, regular Aphrodite girls, make up

Strengths: she's really quiet and fast, she's flexible and has great reflexes.

Weaknesses: she can't stay still, claustrophobic, she's not trusting, she has a bad temper, she's really violent, has panic attacks

ANIMALS (Yea it's weird but so what)

Name: Shayla nickname: Shay-Shay

Animal: 6 week old Munchkin kitten

Owner (if have): Violet

Appearance: a small white and tabby kitten with dark blue eyes

Who can they speak with (demi-gods with parents who have that animal as a sacred animal): anyone who can speak with animals

Personality: she's very much like Violet, she's sarcastic, stubborn, and not afraid to use her claws once in a while. She loves her owner and has a fiery temper. She might be small, but never underestimate her.
wishingonthestars chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Full Name: Valerie Song

Nickname: Val or Vally

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Parents: Apollo and Vanessa Song (Mortal Mom)

Siblings: None

Appearance: Blond hair with baby blue eyes Who is also very pretty

Personality:Sweet,smart, and nice but if you do something bad to her she will get you back bad

Love Interest: Yes, a soon of Morpheus Please

Backstory: Her mother died while giving birth. Then was taken by Apollo and given to Artemis. She grew up with the hunters than became a hunter but when she found out she was a demigod she quit the hunt amediatly (I don't know how to spell that)

Weapon: Bow and arrow given to her by Apollo named Ascanrina

Powers: She can make you go blind by the brightness of the sun and can also make you deaf by the loudness of music

Fatal Flaw: Hubris

Determined or Undetermined: Determined

Extra: Her name Valerie was her mothers favorite Amy Winehouse and Valerie can sing it really good

And I am the writer for Characters Please and you have been choosen to be the main character
Lisowczycy chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
DEMI-GODS

Full name: John black Geary

Nickname: black jack

Gender: male

Age:10

Parents (no big 3): iris

Siblings (mortal only): none

Appearance: has long blond, black eyes, white skin, about 5’3. He also pretty fit not puff but build most like a runner or swimmer which just makes girls like him. He has a small scar on his left cheek from his first monster attack

Personality: usually a fun loving person, usually a social person most of the time, he can be ruthless and brutal when need to be. But prefer to be reading novels of adventure especially Viking novels, he caring, kind and usually a fine guy to be around. Also every day he practices for hours in the arena to become stronger and better. He also sometimes he lets his pride get the best of him in many situations.

Love interest: sure

Back-story: son of Iris John he was born in New York city, had as normal children as need any demigod can. Found at nine by a satyr after a monster attack he escape, his father Jake Geary was killed in the same attack that he escapes from and afterwards after to camp then being told he a demigod he promise himself he get stronger because he doesn’t want to lose a other love one again.

Weapon(Be a bit descriptive & unique):sword that is disguise as switch blade knife and a lance that is disguise as gold armband he wears on his left arm that when flip turns into his lance.

Powers: can create rainbows without water

Fatal flaw: pride

Determined or undetermined? (as in claimed): determined

Extra: met his mother after she came to comfort him after his dad die and also gave him his weapons plus claim him later
random spazz chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Name:kaiden

Gender:male

Age:appears 13 but is a lot older

Parents:apollo and nyx

Appearance:black hair poker straight goes to midback and in a blue build and usually slightly on the short side.

Personality:really hyper and bubbly in the day but tends to be calm and serious at to like exiciting 't like reveiling he's a god right away .has a soft spot for animals and curious and loves seeing new being insulted but is slow to do act on when he does it's usually really harsh especially at poetry with a passion.

What are they god of?:dusk,dawn ,stars,and healing

Powers:normal god powers,healing,some control of light and shadow,create a hot flame.

Domain:los vegas
OnceInAFullMoon13 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Can we send in two? if so here

Full name: Tyler Black

Nickname: Tye

Gender: Female

Age: 15

Parents (no big 3): Aphrodite

Siblings (mortal only): Bella (little) and Lacey (same), Kaite (Step-sis

Appearance: She has blood red hair, down her back, 6.0 feet; she has brown eyes and long lashes, and olive tan skin. She has light sun freckles barely visible because of her skin. She usually wears a form-fitting purple shirt with dark skinny jeans, a black jacket, figure less gloves and black and white Nickeys.

Personality: She is a ruth-less, fear-less and all together kinda scary girl. She is not afraid to stand up for others, but she usually always win everything. She is usually serious all the time but with friends or close people she get funny, sweet, childish basically the opposite of her usual mood. She trains like everyday. Tyler has a very short temper and unless she backs off get some ice, it’s gonna be soar. She is feared because of her skills, but she is popular among younger campers and boys. She is a fearless, smart, sometime arrogant girl. Big grudge holder. Likes to make boys do things for her.

Other: She wins everything usually but has only a small amount of people who can beat her in a sword fight or capture the flag.

Love interest: Yes, Someone nice, caring, sweet, strong, and funny.

Backstory: Tyler has always been beautiful, but people still made fun of her. One day her boyfriend dumped for no reason and kissed another girl in front of her. So, that night her and her sister (Kaite) had a big fight. Kaite ended up with a broken nose, and a black eye. Tyler didn’t get a scratch. When her mom got home Katie had been knocked out and screamed at Tyler. So, she changed her hair, and her whole wardrob. The next day she got into a big fight with the girl that kissed her boyfriend. She got sent home but her dad got taken by a hellhound. She tried to slay it but failed, nearly getting attacked but another demi-god saved her and brought her to camp. There she got another boyfriend and once again he broke her heart.

Weapon(Be a bit descriptive & unique): A gold sword that has a red base, the base has a wolf on it and three claws on the bottom. It can turn from the sword to her head-band. It’s name is Shadow.

Powers: CharmSpeaking, and everything Aphrodite’s kids can do.

Fatal flaw: Letting boy in, Arrogates sometimes

Determined or undetermined? (as in claimed): Claimed

Extra: Nothing

heres another one

Name: Shadow

Animal: Jaguar

Owner (if have): Nyx

Appearance: A big cat, black “Shadowy” with razor sharp claws and knife like teeth.

Who can they speak with: Nyx, and kids of Nyx (Demi-gods too)

Personality: Shadow is a shady, shifty, and can be a thief. When she steals things she never gets caught. Most people (demi-god and some gods) think she cannot be trusted. When she sneaks around she hides in the shadows. If demi-gods ask (only ones she likes) she will take them to Nyx. She only trusts the strongest, or the ones that prove themselves to her.
20 | Page 1 2 Next »