It's a great story !

An interesting little story you have here. There are a lot of loose ends though. I'm going to go check for a sequel in a minute.

Otherwise interesting and well played.

Wait!? That's it?!

So Luke's mother isn't Padme. Very interesting.

Bravo, my friend, bravo! This story is very well written, and I throughly enjoyed reading it, but it NEEDS a sequel! This is like ending Lord of the Rings just as Sam and Frodo reach the borders of Mordor. It's a crying shame to leave such an epic tale unfinished!

perfection... please this story needs a sequel.

That was a nice reading :) I like it that it's a osychological story :) and I also liked your view on the force.

But I am still confused... So is Padme mother of Luke? 'Cos when there were those hints about Arissa, (who ever taht is, I am not really fond of OCs...) the world wouldn't make sense to me ... But maybe I missed something. I hope.

Still, very well written and with some very interesting ideas :)

Oh, no no no no no, this is a terrible place to end the fic.

Omg, I love this chapter, and the previous, and the one before. I get so carried away reading that I forget to review, and this is so well written that I can only gush excitedly instead of giving good feedback.
I love what you are doing to the characters and to canon.

OMG exciting!

For the first time in fifteen years, he was in undivided agreement with himself.
- Such a great line!

I've enjoyed reading this! You've taken a very interesting path, and I've especially enjoyed the development of Luke and Vader's relationship. I hope someday you are inspired to write a sequel - there's still so much story to tell!

Wait a minute - the end?! But, what happens with Vader? The sun crusher? Luke's sister? Pretty impressive to wander so far from the established storyline and leave me wanting to see where you could go with it! But I don't see a sequel on your page, and that makes me sad.

Nice story, but I'm, confused. This is the end? Feels sort of incomplete but I guess.

Ok. I know this is going to sound nerdy but change the name. A Jedi does not believe in revenge. It's like manger rule for them. Please. I know this is your story but it doesn't match.