Sucked a little bit? Are you kidding? This was just EPIC!

Actually you are the first person I know who can write fighting scenes understandable...
And this, with the KFP2 soundtrack, is more epic than everything I have ever read!
On the other side, you managed to give it an emotional and interesting ending.

Oh, I love your story soo MUCH!

AWESOME! :D

AWESOME CHAPTER! :D

OOOOOOOHHH...NEXT CHAPTER IS GONNA BE AWESOME! I shall read on! :D

AWESOMENESS! :D This story is EPIC so far, I MUST READ MORE!

Hello. To whom my interests may concern, I loved this story. Mainly due to how much work and effort was put into it. I don't understand why you wouldn't want to continue the story though. It has so much potential that seeing you give up on it really brings me to down. However, I read your "Bad New" note at the end and decided to take up on the offer. Please, I would love to continue this story in you favor. I realize how high of a caliber this story, and writing it like you have may take a while. Hell, the first chapter may take me a month to write along with my other stories I writing. But, I'm willing to take the responsibility and give it a shot. And if you feel like handing the story to someone else, I fully okay with it and hope the story lives up to the hype. Please take me into consideration for part two of The White Emperor.
Thank you, :)

hmmmmm maybe but i get craptons of homework everyday in school -_-

I'll take the notes! I actually blacked out when I saw this. It is a shocking blow to the community. I would like to continue this, but I'm pretty busy right now... Still, I might be able to work something out.
Whatever I could do, though, would only be a corrupted visage of the perfection you have bestowed upon us. I accept that with resignation. This was, after all, the most suspenseful and well crafted story on the site. (that I read, that is...)

i have a suggestion try changing the summary to make it sound more interesting some people might thnk of your summary like it as written by an amateur author and not think twice about it since the stories on are un moderated and people will think the story is not worth reading.

omggggg dont be dumb of course you have to continue this awesome sauce

You must continue!

That was AWSOME ! youre making a second part?

I love it. :3 Very entertaining and exciting. The fighting scenes were my favourite (and I really enjoyed the interludes containing parts of Shen's past). I look forward to seeing more! I really hope you continue.

I'm surprised this fanfic hasn't gotten any other reviews though. I'm glad I found it, I think I read it all in two days... ;P Anywho...

Rue
(R.R)

Shu is good with her sword? Who would have guessed. But a peahen is at a natural disadvantage against a peacock: they lack a train. But you demonstrated that, using the most powerful weapon of all, the mind, she was able to turn that against her father. Good for you!
But, I have to point out some grammar errors that are quite frequent.
The only one I could find was this.

"I promise" he lied, and then he stroke...
It Should be "I promise," he lied, and then he struck...

See? You need to put a comma before the quotation marks.

Yeah, Shen without his ambition is like a sword without it's weilder. Impotent, in fact, almost useless. But with it, he becomes a raging cannon.