Hey thanks for the story! most enjoyable! next chapter please! :) x

this is really good, i crave more...

crazycandylove

Ffffttt wow. L way to totally say something weird and not feel awkward. Light needs to get on with his plan! More please! 3

OMG! I LOVED this! Update ASAP! *D

COME BACK I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Welcome back! A Souleater fanfic would be nice but I only watched a few episodes...

Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god! He licked him! XD This so amazing, but now I wonder what type of dog he would be...

Yayy for updates :D

Anyway... Light and L's trip to get some ice-cream was entertaing 3 and L is flirting so blatantly, I love it!

When is Light just gonna viva up and let L f**k him? XD

I can't wait to see what happens next! And Light has to be gay!

I love this! Very, very nice work! Keep up the amazing job and please make more chapters because I want to see what happens next! Damn, now I'm craving ice cream! CHAAA!

...It suddenly stopped... I am too used to reading old archived finished stories. This is so far promising, though while I don't know exactly how OOC L was acting, I would have expected him to have a decent enough poker face to confuse and freak Light out, making him worry whether L was being serious or if this was just yet another weirdo method of manipulating him. *shrug* That was just my take on them, I am interested in seeing what your versions of them will do, and how this story will progress.

Oh, and if you ever get tired of writing this fic before it's finished, PLEASE add a note or a story-less chapter with the announcement it's no longer being updated.

Nothing more annoying that people starting interesting fics and then not knowing if they are ever planning on finishing it or not ;_; At least it's less creepy than seemingly "dead" accounts where all author activity stopped years ago as if they suddenly died - as opposed to e.g. author profiles announcing they left the site. Seeing "dead" accounts is like seeing a digital ghost, so sad. :-(

Anyway, sorry for the rant. I bookmarked this fic on my webbrowser, I am looking forward to future chapters.

Seems to be getting good so far, I hope you continue it soon... Though so far the chapters seems short but it must be hard writing considering their characters and how complex they are. I adore this pairing though, hope to see some updates soon. I'm probably not good at reviewing, I hardly write any so sorry about that. P

Aww that ending was so cute! Poor L... I hope you update soon, I want to know what happens next!

I like this so far :D When Light said he wasn't flirting I was like ' Yeah and your not Kira either'' XD

Update soon so I can see more 'not' flirting ;)

~Neachy-chan

OMG! that awesome! i almost passed out when L said light was flirting with him! Post more... like... Now! or soon.. lol... btw,,, Sand shoe?