| Reviews for Harry's Gate |
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ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 9 . 7/7 I like the idea of Hogwarts being a city ship. Fun chapter and thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 5 . 7/6 Seems that Harry has caused quite the stir in Hogwarts. Thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 4 . 7/6 It's great that Harry is helping Hermione and Neville so much. Ron's attitude is horrible. Thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . 7/6 It's surprising that Albus and Severus are trying to make Harry angry after him being missing for so long. Thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 7/6 Great to read that Harry has already made friends. Thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 7/6 Great first chapter and I like how well Harry has turned out being raised by Jacob. Thanks for sharing! |
CuddlingBear525 chapter 10 . 3/12 Sad that it is ending but in all it was a great story so far. And hope someone will continue it of course with your consent |
BoredKing chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 The first reality is redundant, he is getting the full knowledge of the Asuran and Ori people plus the all Merlin's magical knowledge.I mean Tony is smart but the Asuran and Ori are millions of years more advanced. The 3rd portal is fine if not a bit underwhelming. Maybe if you hadn't made the 2nd portal lead to a world where Harry has so much knowledge of on both tech and magic. The 4th portal is the first actual useful one besides the 2nd. And the 5th is completely useless. So in total only the 2nd and 4th portals actually gave Harry anything . You do realize that with the knowledge and power he has he is basically a god, right? If you try to make him struggle then its complete bullshit. Why is be still all beat up hours after he gained his healing factor? |
hpfan11780 chapter 10 . 12/1/2019 I love this story please continue it |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 9 . 11/21/2019 Wards Not words |
anja.quickert.9 chapter 10 . 11/4/2019 :-( |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 5 . 10/23/2019 Study Studying Daily Prophet |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 3 . 10/23/2019 I really like this story |
Kelvrin chapter 10 . 10/23/2019 Such an awesome story despite all the spelling and grammatical errors. He held such great promise that I read all ten chapters in one sitting when I should have been in bed sleeping. |
Jof3 chapter 10 . 10/13/2019 I have enjoyed this story and am sorry to hear that the inspiration to write has left. I understand not wanting to leave the story unfinished, but I have read some stories where the writer had lost interest but kept going. The results are seldom good. I hope someone picks this story up and does adopt it. |