Wow! I found your work thanks to the fact that you are now following my Hokuto no Ken fanfic...I guess our tastes are a LOT similar!

DUDE I LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT TO SHOW YOU MINE

Ha, that captain got what he deserved! I like the Kaika Shiga Kenpo "Goshigan: Hiiro" It's pretty awesome what kind of things you can do with the Hana Hana no mi fruit! Especially with Rokushiki powering it up!

Heh, you were right, I got confused, but that's something that happens often to me anyways. I like how you're showing her past a bit before her meeting other straw hats. I think it helps develop her character a bit without that mysterious element she has , but I had to go and find out that she's around 19 years old in this chapter. I might still be wrong, but meh. There were a ton of new characters, and the added descriptions of them in the end helped. Hope you two can crank out more chapters, but I don't wanna be pushy.

Great work! I like how Vegapunk was recognized in this even though he hardly ever made an appearance!

A lot of characters, must have took a while to piece them together. Nice chapter

Nwoo. LuffyxRobin forevar. Kidding, I don't care what kind of pairings you may, or may not have. Interesting read. I'll try to stay current as you update whenever.

Nice, there's violence! Always love violence. Shame there's kids getting bad things done to them, but the world isn't so kind to be without that sort of thing. Liked how they got what was coming to them.

Aw, Robin got brainwashed. Sucks to be her. Interesting that she's being experimented on to be a super weapon. Not a lot of Super Robin stories out there.

HOORAY! XD

i like that robin is pure and like's keeping her virginity i really liked that it made me so happy. great story cant wait for the next chapter.

If that's only the first question, then I feel bad for the next ones. *chills* Robin is not someone you want on her bad side.

Good action scenes :D Are the Strawhats going to appear in this?

It's a certainly good read; don't really see any thing wrong with it. Though, I feel bad for Robin; I would think wards the end she would find out about her past (wouldn't they at least have files on the incident?)

I like it! It's pretty intense. I do want to see her interact with the Straw Hats at one point because that makes a stark contrast. I got worried about her finding the kids, and about the little boy, since I remember Lucci killing hostages because they had been weak. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Also, thank's for the technique notes at the bottom