It was great but I wish there was more. The actual operation and them as Jack and Rose would have been great.

Lots of fun!

Was expecting to be taken on the OP with them. Maybe you could add, if interested.

Brilliant, loved this. What a build up. Great writing.

Just discovered this and it was a delectable treat!

Well, wasn't that a lovely story? Enjoyed it from start to finish. It's really good - hope you write more soon!

Thanks for submitting this. Lovely story, with quick updates and great H/R scenes.

Ah so lovely! Brilliant ending (:

Fabulous chapter. Please don't let it end here. An epilogue please.

Absolutely wonderful. I would echo and camillo's comments about a sequel - don't mind a 'm' rated one either. A well written story tho - well done.

The structure of this is really interesting and adds another depth to the writing - I love it! What I loved particularly though was the concern they had for one another before they went 'over the boundaries'. That, i thought, was very in character and way more likely than a full on 'act now consequences later'. A great piece, look forward to new fic from you when you have time :)

But... but... I want to see them at the hotel on the operation! Having lots of chances to prefect their *ahem* cover.

Sequel? Extension? Out and out PWP? ;-)

EEEEEEEE that was just gorgeous! xx

Oh what a lovely ending! Although, im being selfish and I have a request...epilogue? Or sequel? Please?

Lovely WAFie finish. Loved how confident they both were once they got started. Loved it all. Thanks for sharing.

Really enjoyable - thank you!