Reviews for Trixie's Revenge
Guest chapter 8 . 12/1/2014
i think realisticly trixie would say listen sparkle i can cast the spell and snap your neck right now and make it look like an earth pony did it. it's ovensive magic i lack. not brutal magic.
Thundertail913 chapter 8 . 2/27/2013
Great story! I love the part with Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. I think that was the best one out of all the 5 other mane six's scenes. The one with Rarity was clever, too. You have quite a few grammar mistakes, mainly having to do with commas. Otherwise, I liked the whole story and the change in Trixie. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!
-Brush Flight
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
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Zexo87 chapter 6 . 1/13/2012
Glad to see another chapter. Yeah, Trixie may have more power than ever before, but without proper training and discipline, there's no way she can control it properly without overwhelming herself. Great job so far. Keep it up!
armando92 chapter 6 . 1/13/2012
well this was short but i like it, i hope you get chap 7 soon now that you finished your other histories :). Btw you already tried to send this to EqD?
Zexo87 chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Longest... chapter... EVER! I still really liked it though. Can't wait to see the rest. Looks like Trixie's starting to regret this whole thing a little bit.
armando92 chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
thx for another great chapter, i will be reading this in FIMFiction from now since i prefer the layout of that site xD
armando92 chapter 4 . 11/15/2011
awww, this was too short :( well at least is something to read. i hope that you can make a new chapter soon :)
armando92 chapter 3 . 11/5/2011
i like this, hoping to see the chap 4 soon. BTW to your point 3 twi turns rats in horses in EP 26 of S01 the best night ever. So i suppose that trixie can do the same :)
Rockstar74 chapter 3 . 11/3/2011
Great Job. Can't wait to see what happens next. I've read a stroyline in which Trixie and Twilight switch bodies, but I like the direction of this one better. Keep it up.
Tobias Kazama chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
Hey, have you thought about posting you pony stories on ?

Your stories are really good, and I think you might get a lot more reads/reviews over there.
Scriptpony chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
Great so far!I really 'feel' for Twilight and Trixie, mind this but Trixie is a total b1tch. She basicly ruined Twilight's life and i am very excited to see where this goes next. I can't find any real flaws in this, so I guess that calls for ending this review short.
Lilac Iris chapter 3 . 11/2/2011
Liking this story so far, can't wait to see what happens next!
CaptainHookEM1 chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
This is getting intresting
morbus-rus chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
You know, I really love the way it story goes. Now Twilight can understand how bad it feels to not be 'prised pupil of princess' with unlimited money supply, assistants, and respect. Let her feel hardships of Trixie's living.

About Trixie, I think, will go simple genuine gratefulness. Spike, caring about 'twilight', making her mug of coffee, bath or something. Pinkie, throwing party, kind and caring ponies everywhere... It hard to be arrogant when you're surrounded by kind and loving friends)
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