Dude, this was totally great. I loved the layers Dean had buried, with the alcohol poured over the top. This was nicely done,just the right amount of emotion and yet all the gruff and booze and pain. You do the boys and Bobby , and I truly enjoy Sheriff Mills. I would love to see her come back down the line. You treated her spot on in this. Good job!

Awwww. A very nice little break for our heroes. I really like them having a more settled relationship with the sheriff, too. That could come in very handy. :D

Really nice h/c and brother stuff here, too.

Nicely done. :)

I thought this story was very good.

There was only one mistake - The episode "The Girl Next Door" was the third episode, not the fourth.

Thank you.

Wonderful story :D

Dear Obi the Kid,

I'm really enjoying your stories.

Although everyone has different tastes in fiction, I just so enjoy it when the emphasis is put on the boys'emotional brotherly relationship.

It's whatI love about the show and it's what makes it stand out from all the others.

You write their anguish and love so well and I am looking forward to more of your tales.

I wish the show would get back to their brotherly bonding as the last episode wasn't too brotherly at all but seemed to be going back to season 4 and a lack of trust between them!

I hope this is will be corrected in future eps:)

I love the way you have written this from Bobby's point of view. He certainly has the best position to see and understand everything the Winchesters have been through! What a great idea for him to give his point of view to the story. Thanks for sharing!

Fantastic story, love it. Very well written. Love Bobby's POV throughout and very good on how they all take care of each other. I like Jodi too. Good characterization on her.

I loved this! I loved your Bobby's voice. Especially the last line. Thank you.