| Reviews for Eager Kisses |
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UNIMP chapter 1 . 11/23/2013 It was kinda difficult for me to read as I wasn't impressed by how this was structured and I didn't like the repeated numbers in italics, that was just annoying. Also Kurt was a bit OOC for my liking. Good try though |
mysteriouslife chapter 1 . 12/7/2012 Awesome! This is exactly what I was looking for. Great story! Keep up the good work! xD |
Ella Greggs chapter 1 . 10/13/2011 That was a sweet Kurtofsky scene, although much more light-hearted than the actual moment on the show. I like your phrase "angry courage" and I really enjoyed the banter between Karofsky and Azimio. You did a great job conveying their strong friendship with just a few lines of dialogue. I think you also captured Finn - his clumsiness and cluelessness and dimness. (I'm really *not* a Finn fan). Loved the lines: /Why did Lady Gaga have to be so complicated?/ /Looking down at his sneaker clad feet, the quarterback wondered why he hadn't thought to put the shoes on first./ I thought Kurt was a bit OOC, particularly his 'what the hell, I might as well kiss someone' attitude, but it fit with the overall tone of the story. I hope you'll keep writing Kurtofsky and/or DaveAzimio friendship stories, because I think you do it very well. |
BrittFabulous chapter 1 . 10/8/2011 ok this was seriously adorable. and the groping just made it better. lol great story |
KurtofskyoverKlaine chapter 1 . 10/8/2011 This was totally awesome. So wish it could have happened in canon. Thanks for sharing. |
Vamp gyrl chapter 1 . 10/8/2011 Aaawww! I don't usually read KurtxDave like AT ALL! But this was way too wicked! :) |
PowerLad chapter 1 . 10/8/2011 Cute Story...ah...what ifs? gotta love'm. |