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sanji and viola or pudding

You have to continue this its so good

Well, U're really good in messing with people's emotion ,,! (p′︵‵。)

When's the next chapter ?!

My heart~~ I think it's going to break …
(艸)

My tears can't stop shedding ,,! (ಥ_ಥ)

I luv the Monkey's twin ,, (Haru 'n Chika 're twin right,?) 'N I also luv d'relationship between Kuina 'n Daichi …!
Question though, was Kuina d'older sibling? Cuz U write that her age 13 n Olvia 14,, but she's closer to Dai . .

aww i love this what happened to those boys *sweatdrop*

nice childhood flashback

I hate you you kept me up all night you know how tired I will be tomorrow in school.

More lol! This was so good couldn't stop reading liked how the daughter had all the cool abilities. She'd be a strong marine . Hope you make more. Really good

I love law
And the daughter of the Pirate king wanting to be a marine :o that would be interesting

That was some interesting insight. I guess with such interesting family on both sides it's not surprising that at least one child from Luffy and Nami could become a Marine. I wonder how well of a Marine she'll be?

And Law... I can't believe they let him keep his position! XD Or that the Seven Warlords are still around (going off what Issho wants). It's also funny how he interacts with Chika, and how much he knows of Luffy.

Awesome J theme!

loved Zoros childhjood and nice to see you write again

I really like your story! It would be amazing if you could bring up Ace's and Whitebeard's Grave somehow? Just to give you some new ideas, maybe? Oh and I love how you are writing the characters, they are not OOC at all and the children are so amazing :D !

Sorry for my bad english, I am not a native English Speaker,
But hey, at least I tried my best to review :D

Anyways, I am soo looking forward to the next chapter!

These stories are all so cute! I love how you've written each of the characters and their kids . (the one with Dragon is my favorite). I really like these stories, so please continue!