Great story, I hate to see it go but it isn't the first and it won't be the last.

lol you shock the heck out of me when I saw that this had an update. Good on ya! Good luck!

I was just recently introduced to this and I really enjoy it. I hope you find the will to update it, its been 3 years ;w; I would love to see where you take the story!

Update SOON please

I read this over for. the second time and still can't wait for an update. Please update soon this is a very good story and I want to know what happen next.

I rarely give reviews but I just really need to say this.

This is the most decent Hellsing fanfic that I've encountered so far.

Ehhhhhhhhh...
I'm really, really scared for the Zeplins. Those poor, innocent war balloons only wanted to blow up London, but the evil Major dragged them into some nasty things...
Poor, poor Zeplins.

To qoute Hellsing Abridged, "He's so fucking fat! He's like a german {somethingiforgot}!"

Is it weird to cry for Seras while reading her being tormented especially when she begged to comeback to Hellsing and Alucard & The scene she becomes broken? That got me tearing up. Love the story! Keep up the Great work! Please update l!

I honestly loved every chapter because it was totally accurate to the characters every step of the way. Its nice to see that someone has written a fanfiction where it isn't so sappy and love-struck. It kept me captured in every chapter. Please don't let someone's negativity stop you from writing this. I can't wait until your next chapter of it if you do decide to continue it. I loved how you stuck to Jan's character!

Love it please finish it

Great story! I am definitely hooked. And don't mind tetsuo or whatever name it is. He (or she) probably has a mind of a 12 year old and can't even write a fanfiction as good as this one. Hell, he/she can't even write an intelligible review.

Oh and don't mind "lost bye" and Testuo/ testuo Shima, they are just bullying every story that isn't a AlucardxSeras with Alucard acting as a lovesick puppy (look up Thirst if you want an example), they are actually quite pathetic... especially as I think they are the same person. Must be sad beeing them so please don't pay attention hopefully they will realise noboby care and stop.

Just thinking : what if Alucard actually tried to protect Seras in his own way?
After all he wanted her to become a true vampire, if he had killed Jan in the begenning it would never have happened. Then seeing her again and hearing her beg to come back maybe he decided that it was in fact too hard for her and that killing her would be a mercy as Jan can fuck with her mind even if she is away... Or maybe I'm just trying to find excuses because I love SerasxAlucard and seeing her abandoned is just so SAD.

Anyway good job! Your story is original and well written, I love everything about it, especially Alucard because I just can't figure him out... and Jan because he is fucking crazy and awesome. I hope you will keep surprizing us, I'm especially curious about how things will turn out with Walter and how Seras relationship with Jan will evolve.

Sorry about the long review and my (horrid?) english. Good luck and thanks for the update

this was painful to fucking read...alucard will never let Jan steal seras...you really suck at are an horrible cares for is uncanon crap