Great story, though I noticed Marceline technically didn't win the game. She lifted both feet off the ground when she celebrated knocking her ball over Bubblegum's.

That was a beautiful ending

Thanks for sharing!

This is my fav fic

loved it! pancake metaphor was nice : D a review is not a fav, but enjoy the fix!

Great work! I really liked it, it was sweet!

Fabulous, hot, sexy story! Loved it :D

Omg my heart can't take it! It's like a pretty balanced blend of super lovey and hella naughty

Ugh yes, see cartoon network? All you have to do is this minus the smutty stuff, but leave in the cute pancake innuendo. It's so simple.
This was adorable, well written, I hope it works out for them this time round...

Ah, there is no better live sorry than the type that ends with pancakes. Thanks for this delicious read, equal parts sweet and smutty and that lil dash of angst, just how I like it :D
It was really good, you're a great writer.

That's it? you cant just leave it that. You gotta finish it dude. what a tease I was like all ready to keep reading all interested and wantin to know and shit and just like nope. damn this was good.

I really liked this story

Aww, so sweet. But um, why was Marceline only ever the "giver"? O.o OTT, great story! :)

Ok so I love love love your writing, and I find it super relatable, thank you for writing a super good marceline and PB fanfic, they are my favorite characters. 3

I like your story but... ''experiment'' is still the best.
Try reading it.