This was beautiful and I cried a bit. I think the show missed the mark by not showing Rory's grief.

Ohhhh that totally breaks my heart.
You have such a talent to pick their personalities it's totally amazing how you do it great job.

This is beautiful. And so right, for both of these ancient, young men.

*laughs
Haha
Haha *cries

I'm so glad that you wrote Rory's side of the story. He had it rougher than Amy for sure at times. I love your stories, thanks for writing this one too.

Sad and sweet, made me cry a little and fanfics rarely do. Rory is really underappreciated so I'm glad to find such a great story about him.

Bittersweet, I like it -

I am not even kidding a tear is rolling down my cheek.

lovely story! just what I wish we'd had in the episode or as a missing-moment short clip.

This is amazing... and you are right . Everybody forgot about Rory. He lost her baby, her daughter.

I almost cried. This was very well written.

Seeing the loss of the baby from Rory's point of view, the man who'd always wanted children and lost his own, it's incredibly heart-wrenching.

If you heard that small snapping sound, it was what was left of my heart.

Awesome story! It really helped me realize Rory's sadness over the loss of his baby.

love your incorporation of both sides of Rory. Felt they were a tiny bit OOC, but I guess loosing someone so precious will bring out these emotions. Overall this story touched my heart in all the right places! Thank you.