This fanfic was beautiful... You have done an amazing job.. keep it up :)

Ok, oh the times the entire story was in someone’s head, this story was by far the best version in my opinion. It has the rom com warm fuzzy feelings and some real world pain sprinkled in to keep you grounded.
Great doc glad I read.

U said that her bday was on june 4th in the last chapter...and in this one u have said it is on May?
I know that I'm too late to post it bruh...

Wow. What a great ending to this story.

When could we read Percy's side of the story?

OH MY GODS, i feakin' love her name and her room it's just do pretty. Nice job!

What...

That was a good chapter.

That was amazing! I loved how you made the whole story a vision and ended with Percabeth staying together:)

The end was a great plot twist. Holy Hera, I love this story! At first I was quite furious at Annie that she would like her daughter adopted, I was like on Sarah's position. My mom got pregnant eith me when she was just 21 yrs old. They never thought of adoption though, but my grandpa from my dad thought of abortion but my mom didn't like the ide. So here I am now! I love this story so muchhh! Lavyah author! (Even if this is written 5 years ago)

Ohmygod it's so good huhu and nice plot twist at the end. Thumbs up

Your plot, dialogue, and logistics of this piece are great, but you need to work on your grammar. Due to grammatical and punctuation errors, there is a weird, choppy lack-of-flow that takes away slightly. Keep up the good work, though, you're doing fairly well as a whole.

I just..I- I got no words.. It's.. So..so-awsome so fantastic so Super so lovely so..percabeth-I just don't know what to say!

nvm

Omg that story was of the hook !I think your my new favorite writer !Anyway I'am about to read some other story's of your's hope they are as good as this one I hope. you keep writing I think you got talent
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