can u post more of the oriemo fanfiction

I thank u for the wonderful experience. This was. Real treat to read the pacing was a little fast at frist but it mollode out.

Ore no Imotou this story, KIrino wants her brother help her for buying eroge games and anime. However Kyousuke parents they said the anime is for otaku and for child... Kyousuke's father found it out about Kirino has text some e-mail for buying it on the internet, Kousaka tells his father. He said he buy it on the internet and playing at Kirino laptop.. Kousaka just safe his little sister life because their father can't give buys anime and eroge games..

I can tell you put a lot of effort into this story and I've got to say it was worth it! I now eagerly await this to be amazing sequel! I wish you luck.

Lol, this JYJ guys looks like faggots.

I liked Midori. I hope you feature her a lot in the sequel.

aww... so Kyousuke and Kirino are finally a couple XD yay!

Kirino and Brosuke all the way. Making them non-related would be out of nowhere though.

this is a great story, and I'm rooting for the cest, but the relationships should go through some trials and stuff and Midori is a great trial for Kyousuke and Kirino's relationship...

Hahaha I love this story so much.

I have to admit at first I felt a little skeptical about the story, I mean Kyousuke being a massive star din't feel right to me, but after I read the first couple of chapters I was completely on board. The fact that Kyousuke concealed his identity was also a big plus, because it gave the readers a reason to know why Kirino, or anyone in fact, didn't know of Kyousuke's famous life.

Well all i cay say is that you sure do have an inventive mind, and I really do like the creation of Midori-san because it does seem to fit into the oremio universe. Although I will be rooting for Kirino throughout this story, but that does not Midori is a bad character not at all. In fact quite the opposite, she seems believable and something different to Kirino and Ayase.

I like the humour in this story but also the relationships between each character. Kirino's relationship with Kyousuke feels a little strained which is completely understandable but there are also moments (Such as them sleeping next to each other) that show they care and want to be close to one another. Ayase's relationship is equally tense but Midori seems to offer some fresh air, it is less angsty with her and she is far more considerate of his feelings than Ayase (Although I think Kirino cares more but shows less)

I'm still unsure of whether Midori and Kyousuke really had sex, they may be talking across purposes for all we know. But I'll leave that up to you to decide :)

Great chapter once again and I can't wait till the next installment :D

Best of Luck

You know, I actually like Midori. You should just make her the main pairing and forget the incest.

Hey I thought this was a Kyousuke X Kirino story (:(

Wow...Midori moves fast. Looking forward to next chapter. :)

This seems more like you removing Kyousuke and inserting yourself into the series at some random point in time. Kyousuke wouldn't know much about 4ch speak or internet terms like trolling or you mad bro. If I remember right he specifically says that he doesn't often use the internet in canon. What makes it seem like even more of a self insert/original character is that you had him randomly, off screen/out of the story dye his hair blonde.

Oooohhh...he should've said something. He's in deep trouble :/