Talk about PERFECTION! The fic in its entirely was lit - you set up Jim’s present dilemma nicely, loved Molly’s entrance, the mega hot sex - but the ending in particular, from the moment they prepare to leave the cell and on, was dark hot perfection. Amazing work!

I adore this fic, I really like the idea of Molly and Sebastian being friends - it somehow seems like a massive step on the road to Molly and Jim being in a proper long-term relationship. I really hope you write a sequel for this one where Molly and Jim are on holiday, it would be nice to see Jim spoil her in all the capacity that his work truly allows and for her to truly enjoy it,
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This was just wow. Just perfect. I really liked this side of Molly. Omg and Moriarty just unf.

This was amazing. Excecllent characters, excellent writing, I loved the entire thing.

This is really good! The sex scene was fierce and so very... Jim, lol. I hope you plan to continue!

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God, Molly..? very different but in an interesting way~

Another amazing story! Loved it! You are so good at writing about naughty things. And I don't just mean a little slap and tickle either, but the whole darkly devious criminal aspects.

Holy Moses do I love me some Molliarty! This was just soo wonderfully done. I love the dark side of Molly (we all know it's there) and I really, really, really hope that somehow that will be looked into in season 2 (although I seriously doubt it).

Fabulous job!

-Shelly

This is hot and creepy. I love it!

This is just beautiful. I normally hate the idea of Molly turning bad but this was executed perfectly...much like the corpses she left behind...

Keep writing! I'll make sure to read more of your work.