| Reviews for He Doesn't See Me |
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Changeling121 chapter 17 . 10/9/2018 Nice to hear a sequel is up, I'm going to search for it later. |
Changeling121 chapter 16 . 10/9/2018 Oh that story does it all in the right way. Not sure if it really has to do with the characters, or if you just write better than some others I'm more or less forced to endure since I visit a different side |
Changeling121 chapter 12 . 10/9/2018 I kind of wished, that in one way or another the thing with the medal came up, what Mario and Luigi did. |
Changeling121 chapter 10 . 10/8/2018 She should have started to get a fit and yell at the groups or something, it would have been probably pretty funny. |
Changeling121 chapter 8 . 10/8/2018 I don't like timeskips and hope not to much happened like her suddenly being friends with a bunch of characters, but I will see how it works with the whole chapter. Well this was nice, I saw nothing that made the timeskip weird for me, good job and in chase you see this, please start to think about a sequel if that is even possible. It could even be just something like Bowser and Mario working together because of something and Rosabelle and Peach meeting each other. I have to admit I like Paper Peach more but she isn't in this world. |
Changeling121 chapter 3 . 10/8/2018 That is really good so far, I nearly want a sequel already. I hope the story is not to old and the author still active. |
kerrowe chapter 8 . 7/23/2018 That's pretty sweet. |
Unca Bob chapter 17 . 9/23/2017 Well this was sweet. Thoroughly enjoyed it. |
Nameless Angel 00 chapter 17 . 10/23/2015 I love that you wrote this, I don't know why but I always seem to guy for the guy most hated. |
Transformers Cowgirl chapter 6 . 8/27/2014 Me likey! ;3 |
PandorasBoxOfWorks chapter 17 . 2/2/2014 oh my gosh.. this story was so awesome, and I loved how you were busting with creative words, yet not 'over' doing it. Now I'm gonna go to read the sequel! :D |
Makaylachan007 chapter 11 . 11/21/2013 I love love love this story! |
ROOCIS chapter 17 . 2/24/2012 This story rocked! In some of the chapters I actually cried while reading this. So I plan on reading the sequal. |
Mariel1 chapter 17 . 11/12/2011 I really love the way this turned out. Rosabelle is a refreshing change over the usual picture of a delicate princess, and I rather liked the way you portrayed her growing relationship with Bowser. It didn't make sense for him to immediately fall for her, because he was so focused on another target with that one-track mind of his that it never even occurred to him to consider her. Bowser's ex-wife seemed pretty heartless! And her characterization is actually a bit similar to the one I had in mind, but you got yours down first and it's still not a mirror image. So, I just want to avoid any misunderstandings in the future, if you happen upon any of my own stuff. I'm not copying you, I promise; I've had Clawdia Von Dreher's character in mind for the past three years, I just can't prove it. XD I really admire your writing. Keep up the good work! |