This is a great story and I would be interested in reading more of you ever get the chance, although I do suggest that you proof read your story and fix some errors because that would help with comprehension, but other than that I loved it :)

I just found this story and absolutely love it.

I really liked this story. I look forward to any epilogues you might deign to give us.

This is lovely! Very original, I'd never have thought of it.

Congratulations on finishing! A real accomplishment!

This was really good and it was awesome to read. It would be fantastic to read some more if you ever feel so inspired!

Have to say, I'm a huge Supernatural fan. Especially of Sam. Good idea, doing something like this... My only issue: um... you said five and put four (not that I'll vote now, it's much too late). Honestly though, I'm curious as to what that fifth option was...

interesting. to me there was a little too much Cas but I get why you ut him in there so much.
thanks for writing!
Yuki

Your story ideas and flow are good, but sometimes the typos cause a bit of confusion. Overall, I would rate this as a good showing for your first multiple chapter story.

That was so good, I wish there was some follow up thought.

Maybe a squeal eh? Anyways, I'm impressed.

I DON'T REALLY WATCH SUPERNATURAL, IT DIDN'T MATTER THOUGHT.

For those of you checking reviews, wondering if you need to understand supernatural, you don't.

I'm going to go see if you have any other Merlin Fic's written now. It was that kind of good.

OH! One thing. The spacing *irritated foot tapping* everything being single spaced in connected paragraphs was a drawback I found. It's just a bit harder to keep track of. Then the last chapter was double spaced (which I appreciated) but then it brought up a format inconsistency. That could just be being a dick with your uploaded filed though. I know sometimes it just does it's own thing.

- Mo

I absolutely love supernatural and especially Castiel. So this story was over the top for me. You really did a great job. I loved the idea and I really would like to see some follow up - including the Winchesters :))

There were some moments that I wished you had taken another direction, like more detailed explanations of what happened in the five years or the antogonist being someone we knew like Morgana rather than Rex. And sometimes the story moved too fast that I wasn't able to be sucked into it like I am there I had to reread a couple of times. I also thought Arthur was a bit OOC at times, I don't think being the clotpole that he is he won't be that passive in a situation like that, more passive than usual but not a bystander either. Because I love both shows I read a lot of crossovers and I mean A LOT. Yours is a successful and clearly thought one - considering the junk out there.

I am really trying give some constructive criticism - I hope you won't get mad. Boy there are some lunatics here. Let me just say I am just a reader and I will never be able to write the same idea as good as you did. - I hope one day though after collecting enough muse from you people. But I am a experienced reader and I encourage you to go on with this story for all Merlin/SPN freaks out there. Best wishes in your creations.

~Aria

Awesome story :D

I liked it and would love to see some follow up.

Wow! This was really cool! I loved the imagery, and just tenseness of the whole thing. Great story!

Only thing was a few spelling and grammar mistakes, plus the formatting made my eyes go a bit buggy. But it didn't take away from the story at all :)

I've never watched Supernatural, but I know who Castiel is, and this worked perfectly well without having seen the show :)

Ari

I'm glad that Arthur had decided to make a stand. Even if it means betraying his father (and would it really be a betrayal? I don't think so), Arthur needs to become king. That future is definately not one that any of the characters deserve to live in.

I like how Merlin, more than anyone else, made up Arthur's mind. It shows how strong their friendship is. I also liked how Arthur was about to beat a dummy to a pulp. Those scenes are always fun to read/watch :).

Confession time: I have never watched Supernatural, though it looks good, so I would not understand the last "epilogue" that you have planned (where Castiel talks about Merlin and Arthur to the two brothers). However, I would be happy to read all of the others, and I will certainly read the one I just mentioned. It would be interesting to read about their reactions.

Keep up the good work!