I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Snape, fathering James Potter. Even better than Snape, meeting Albus Severus. :D

Don't really like the end. I tought the story was about Harry and Severus loving each other and not à story about Harry' Severus AND Ginny. I don't think Severus and Ginny could like each other...

This is so beautiful, please write more! Loved it, though it was my first experience with Snarry. It felt so right. Very well written.

I really liked how Ginny played out in this story. In most fics like this, she's whiny or vengeful, but I like how strong she is in this one. I loved seeing Harry's relationship with Severus and Ginny. It seemed pretty real and balanced. Good job!

What an incredible idea you executed! The tripartite bond was a nice touch as it kept Snape respectable and upstanding in my view of your 'verse. Thanks for sharing!

This brought me to tears. I am all admiration, both for the incredibly strong woman that Ginny is in this story, and for your skill in writing it. I almost stopped reading halfway through as I felt so badly for poor Ginny and angry with Harry for seeming to have no regard for what he was inflicting on her, but she triumphed in the end - which is where my misty eyed bit started.

This is an absolutely wonderful story! I'm so glad I found you as a writer.

The three of them are suited to each other. And I am especially happy with the way that James asserted his rights as a son, while accepting Snape's right as a father.

Snape needs lots more kisses than he's ever gotten; he's been more deprived than Harry that way. No wonder he was slowly perishing living by himself.

And Ginny has her darkness, too, though she has yet to admit it; no one is touched by Tom Riddle and escapes that. But that is part of what drew her to Harry, and possibly in time, to Severus.

A gorgeous, gorgeous read! Ginny deserves Harry's love and Severus' respect.

(I confess I too have been entertaining a similar idea for a while about this very trio but in the face of your splendid writing, I'm not sure I dare to chance it :))

James rounded off the story beautifully and I'm sure the Potters will succeed in mellowing Severus in the end.

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

It was a masterstroke to make this story from Ginny's point of view. I keep trying to write my own story with three characters in a long-term relationship, but it's weirdly hard to write it organically. I think you've done it quite admirably, and Ginny's memorable "crying then laughing" scene after she essentially proposes marriage is the leavening of reality the story needed to maintain its integrity! Structurally, I mean. :)

In short: lovely!

-K

A wonderful, heartbreaking story! The way you have crafted the relationships between these characters is beautiful. I have never really been a Ginny fan until this story. You have fleshed her out in a way that Rowling never quite managed, in spite of her good work with other characters. Thank you for this!
Moonsign

I had no idea what I was getting into when I started reading this but Iaughed so much. And I really liked your idea. I was wondering is something like that actually possible or just your imagination at work? Thanks for the story!

KCK-Lumcer

Bravo. )

wow, this was amazing!

the scene with harry and snape in the big chair, when harry tried to calm severus down and called him so many sweet names... my smile was soooo big! *lol*

and i really liked the ginny in this story, even if i hadn't in the books. and it was a nice thing at the wedding-dance, when harry called her guinevere. :)

as i said, i liked this story very much, thanks a lot for writing and posting. (and sorry for my bad english, the only practice i have is reading fanfictions *lol*)

greetings

chiisu