| Reviews for The Lightning Prince |
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Danirodriguez1995 chapter 9 . 7/16 Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched. |
INDRA ASHURA chapter 9 . 5/5 I like the fic and hope u can update it more and soon i hope sooner if possible thank u |
Samthman chapter 9 . 2/11 Amazing story that ended too soon |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/17/2018 Your story was amazing don't let those that don't like it get you down after all most of them couldn't wright a decent story even if there life's depended on it while yours is incredible in so many ways |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/1/2018 When will you be able to update because this story is so good! I really like it and am excited for other chapters |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/1/2018 UPDATE again please |
Shu Ouma GC chapter 2 . 8/1/2018 Can someone adopt this? |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/23/2018 update pls |
CyberNinjaKat chapter 9 . 2/20/2018 It's a shame you never continued this. I liked it better than the other lightning empire story. |
ChaosJeff chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 I’m not gonna get my hopes up, but I’m gonna follow the story in the rare chance that you decide to update it |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/11/2017 Your story is a huge mess. Not only you have too many Mary Sues but you also revealed Naruto’s heritage way too early and thus preventing yourself to let your plot build up. You also made Azula very OCC, according to Canon she had a very horrible personaility ever since her childhood and you made her fall in love with Naruto even though she should have questioned his background first. You also skip too many important events like on chapter 9 you just suddenly make Naruto appear out of nowhere to save yourself the trouble of writing a more meaningful plot build up, and so this just shows you’re a lazy writer. Good thing this story has been abandoned because it would have wasted many people’s time reading it. So readers be careful, this story will make you cringe. |
Meltricon12 chapter 4 . 11/15/2017 it was stupid for naruto to reveal his heritage |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2017 Soo... Naruto's OP... |
Pancake Fury chapter 5 . 9/24/2017 'Two years old and already a sight to see' ' two and already a heartbreaker' you're crossing dangerous waters my friend |
lancelot.knight chapter 9 . 8/28/2017 love the story but it needs updating! |