| Reviews for The Unforeseen Ally |
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Guest chapter 10 . 3/30 I hate that excuse. I killed because I was ordered. You really couldn’t have used your mind to say no, or come up with a plan? Itachi is that dumb he couldn’t fathom “hey! I have a brain, let me say no because I got free will!” |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30 We really couldn’t have a platonic relationship? |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/30 All men wish to harm and frighten people. And why the heck is Sasuke not trying to escape this evil place? Itachi needs a knife in him now! |
Guinevere chapter 9 . 10/2/2015 I know this fic ended years ago, but I just wanted to say that a forced sexual act of any kind, whether it's penetration or oral, IS rape. What Orochimaru did to Sasuke WAS rape, not "Just…just really, really horrible sodomy". It was rape. |
sazunaki chapter 5 . 9/10/2015 ... I dont understand this mashup of a story anymore... but I guess I'll go along with it... |
sazunaki chapter 4 . 9/10/2015 I loved everything until this chapter. I feel like the pacing seen in previous chapters completely vanished as you rushed the development of the brothers relationship. It all made sense until now... I feel like Itachi would have had to try harder for Sasuke to be able to feel - to care again. Furthermore, while I support Uchihacest, I feel like it was uncalled for and misplaced in this chapter. If you intended to have it in this story, you should take the time to nurture their relationship so that it would blossom into such a relationship. Adding smut randomly ruins the story you are trying to portray.. |
Kandalyn Kohl chapter 10 . 6/13/2014 God, I loved this so much...there are no words... |
LouiseUchiha chapter 9 . 1/19/2014 So cute! :3 :3 |
LouiseUchiha chapter 8 . 1/19/2014 Ohhh fuck |
LouiseUchiha chapter 7 . 1/19/2014 So sweet! :3 I will ignore theUchihacest parts |
LouiseUchiha chapter 6 . 1/19/2014 Poor baby! T-T |
LouiseUchiha chapter 5 . 1/19/2014 Oh Fuck! Deidara you are a bitch! Poor Sasu-baby T_T |
LouiseUchiha chapter 4 . 1/19/2014 No more Uchihascest please! Everything was awesome until here. |
LouiseUchiha chapter 3 . 1/19/2014 So cute his brotherly love! Dont be Uchihacest please! |
LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 1/19/2014 I think Sasuke is so cute :3 |