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   Pikanet128 chapter 6 . 5/8/2017 That was nicely done Love it |
| biancaalmada1 chapter 14 . 9/6/2016 Muy interesante me gusta :3 |
| curiositycollection chapter 13 . 4/14/2013 "Tries to think back to the endless Castle marathons that Pete made her sit through." Wait - Pete watches "Castle"? :) "she feels like an intruder. An ill-prepared, underdressed intruder." GREAT line! "found a stray dog. And then something about lasagna and a broom" Ha! Cute reference to your "Pavlov" story. Aww, the Farnsworth! I love Artie & his plan! Great way to resolve the story with Steve's death and Claudia's quest. This is a wonderful story. Well done! |
| curiositycollection chapter 12 . 4/14/2013 "I thought I was going to lose my mind, too." Wow - excellent tie-in to Claudia's backstory! Aw! Painfully difficult family reunion. Great characterizations all around - well done. |
| curiositycollection chapter 11 . 4/14/2013 "Well that, or he's just ignoring her. But either way, she keeps quiet." Ha. Great line. "'So…this Caturanga guy…has something to do with…' she gestures to his lopsided smile. 'Your confusing demeanor?'" Another great line :) LOVE the Claudia and Artie reunion, and Artie's plan - great chapter :) |
| curiositycollection chapter 10 . 4/14/2013 LOVE that Claudia's connection to "home" is symbolized by the Farnsworth ... and a literal connection that can be traced. LOVE the replayed scene of Artie giving Claudia the original Farnsworth. "Does she know how to hotwire a car?" Pete asked. Claudia silently replied to his question: Yes." Ha! Nice detail. Suspenseful chase scene! |
| curiositycollection chapter 9 . 4/14/2013 "Disclaimer: I don't own Warehouse 13. If I did, the Christmas episode would've made it on to the Season 2 DVD. Seriously, that made me mad. Anyone else bothered by that?" YES, I consider this to be Syfy cheating, by putting the Christmas ep(s) on the "wrong" DVDs. Then, I suppose, S3-Xmas will be on a S4 DVD? And what if S4 is packaged as 2 sets for the split season? Ugh! "Leena didn't know a lot about her supposed 'abilities.' She liked to think she had a handle on them." Interesting idea/perspective for Leena's abilities! "Because Claudia had done it once before when everything unraveled and fell to pieces. She was going to run." Great line. Whoa, so much strife and conflict in the "family"! Makes for a great chapter, though :) |
| curiositycollection chapter 8 . 4/14/2013 "Which is the real trap?" You've set up a terrible dilemma for Claudia, by which I mean, great for dramatic purposes :) Tense confrontation scene with Regent Jane - well done! p.s. - I vote for "BRRRZZZZZZT. BRRRRZZZZZRRRTT" as the official spelling for the Farnsworth ring. |
| curiositycollection chapter 7 . 4/14/2013 "Disclaimer: I don't own Warehouse 13. If I did, we'd see more of Brenda, the infamous mail woman." LOL - your disclaimers are funny, but also true! And yes - Brenda would be SO great as a semi-regular character! "He wondered if he could make her smile like that again. He doubted it." Aww - poor Artie! "He saw her much younger face, and heard her much younger voice, when she stared at him and muttered, 'You promised.'" Heartache! I mean, uh, very effective, tied back to the S1 episode! Great chapter - very well done. |
| curiositycollection chapter 5 . 4/14/2013 Flashback to Warehouse 12, my other favorite Warehouse :) And thank you for giving Caturanga interesting stuff to do - I just love his character! "What about this… Mr. Fredericks fellow?" Ha! Interesting idea! This is a wonderful backstory you've created for the Pocketwatch, and its connection to the Warehouse! Excellent chapter. |
| curiositycollection chapter 4 . 4/14/2013 The Pocketwatch! (I wish the Pocktwatch, by itself, had been the time-travel device.) "because the watch doesn't deal with dead people." (...) "It deals with dead Warehouses." Great idea for a S3 Finale follow-up! |
| curiositycollection chapter 3 . 4/14/2013 "'Now.' She growls." - Uh, oh - Angry!Myka ... "'I'm not.' She doesn't like to argue with herself. It reminds her too much of her time spent at Mellinger's." Nice detail & reference to backstory. Good characterization for Claudia, TENSE confrontation scene - GREAT chapter! LOL - nice reference to Never Been Tesla'd :) |
| curiositycollection chapter 2 . 4/14/2013 "She sighs contentedly. Machines are so constant." Great Claudia characterization. :) Claudia breaks into the Warehouse, again! Great chapter, & interesting set-up for your story! |
| curiositycollection chapter 1 . 4/14/2013 S3 Finale aftermath! Yes, interesting story-question - how long before Claudia & Leena found out the others were still alive? "ZZZZZZZRT. she used to love that sound. Now it makes her sick." GREAT detail to add to the story - Claudia's attachment to her Farnsworth and how it represents her formerly happy life! |
| Chinagirl18 chapter 15 . 8/19/2012 Ah! I love Jinksy! Thanks for the alternate ending. Can't wait for the last chapter. Amazing story! Favorited and alerted (for the last chapter). |
