hello, thank you for the interesting story! just want to make some note, you pronounce kamaji name's wrong at the beginning of the chapter, it's not komaji but kamaji. but i guess you have already realize it cause later you wrote it kamaji. and i found something a bit disturbing while lin make a joke about cpr, i mean she's a spirit from a spirit world and idk cpr looks like some word from the human world and all. at the later chapter i kind of imagining lord of the ring lol. of course it's not bad and rather interesting, but maybe it would be more integrated if you use japanese myth instead. like for sun god you may use amaterasu and for the moon you may use tsukuyomi. and for the water spirit name, mizu means water and it's okay using it but it's sound too blunt /while japanese tend to be more round about and much implying in their writing/ so for an insight you could use name like sui (水) it's the other pronounciation of water beside mizu. it's just a bit weird to hear a god named mizu since mizu is usually use in case like "what do you want to drink?i want to drink water/ mineral water (mizu)". and i hope chihiro wouldn't be so clueless because I think she should be smarter than that like when oh she found haku's bloody clothes! in there i kind of expect she to realize immediately why there are no punishment and why haku gone for three days. lol. but it's ok. your story was interesting. sorry for the long comment. this is merely suggestion from what i felt while reading, and i don't force you to take it to your story because you're free to write anything. looking forward for the rewrite version! XDD

I love chapter twelve. So nice and so romantic.
I love how Haku's like" it's not your fault, I took the punishment. " I'm like, OOHHH MYYYY GOOOOOOD THIS PERSON IS GOOD

Oh man! The feels of this chapter...tsk tsk. Mean Hoki !

i think it felt good to chihiro to tell her friends what happened to her

what an amazing amazing chapter!

somehow i think Oli's decison to keep the seal is gonna bite him in the butt

I like your story!

Like your beginning!

AAAKKHHHH! Sorrry i didnt review sooner, i have a tendency to binge read...a LOT...when i get into a story. I watched spirited away recently, so i only started reading fanfics for it the other day. I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR! To be honest, this is the best on yet, and iv read an 18 chapter one already...I can't wait to read more of this. Also...To be honest, even though Yubaba did bad things in the movie even, i never really thought she was a bad person. Yeah, she has some not-so-good intentions alot of the time, and she is kindof mean, but I think she can be fair, and semi nice sometimes. She didn't like Chihiro, but she recognized that she did a good thing, even if it was just another thing for her greed. She wasn't unfair really, and she wasn't abusive to her workers. I think Yubaba is misguided, but overall, I think deep down she is a good person, even if she is very unpleasant at times. Annnnd that's my rant about the movie! XD I do love where you are going wih this story, i think it would make an amazing sequel as an anime movie. I think Haku needs to get a move on with telling Chihiro how he really feels, before she has another meltdown.

I really love the story. It was hard to put it down so i found my self walking and reading. I hope you write another one.

Loved it

this little turd better throw that in the ocean. also, CHI-HAKU IS ALIVE YAAAASSSSSSSS

That was quite nice! Somehow this chapter reminded me of Traditional Chinese beliefs of the elements of everything! However, as far as I remember from the movie, Chihiro's last name was Ogino, not Ogeni. Sorry if it seems offending, but I still appreciate this chapter!

Oh god I was literally about to start crying if this was the last one

Under a new story please, I love this one but wouldn't mind reading the rewrite.

THAT'S COOL!
I love it SO SO MUCHH! If there is s3? xD