Hi Squilf ! I don't know if you still read your reviews but I wanted to send you a message to say : THANK YOU !

I just LOVED this fiction. Absolutely amazing, funny and beautiful.
BTW, I'm French, and I've read the translation first, and I felt in love of your story then I wanted to read it in English too.

I think it's my favorite fanfiction ever (: so, thank you for this wonderful story.

I will read soon "Paris je t'aime" and, well, if you're agree, I would like to translate it in French, some day... I'm not really good in English but it can be a good exercice for me, ah ah '

AW MY HEART...

OH MY GOD I LAUGHED SO HARD! HAHAHAHAHA!
THE PIJEONS! GOD THE PIJEONS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I ADORE THIS! It's wonderfully written and absolutely entertaining. A true winner. Thank you for creating and sharing such a great fic!

Awww! :') That was so beautiful! I was almost in tears the whole time! I love how it was in Paris and with the snow and the art museum and you just made everythng seem so beautiful and ROMANTIC aaaand now I'm gonna cry. Ooofffff to read the sequel now!

Aww. Oh NO! Eames HOW? How may I ask do you just LEAVE that beautiful little icesculpture that's really not underneath it all?
Squilfie (can I call you that? Jks :P) you have just officially broken my heart. /3
Buuut I love it and so I shall continue reading XD

Wow. Just wow. I cannot BELIEVE I didn't start reading this earlier, it is AMAZING! :')

Hi, I'm Fyl. I'm french, and I know your fanfiction thanks to a translator who wrote the two parts, but I cannot wait for the part 3 so I read it in english. But It was brilliant and I laughed and cried even if there were two or three sentences where I was lost. I think it means you're a great autor. I really love the end, I love all the story! Thanks, really. I run for read Paris je t'aime...in english. See you soon!

I read this fic a few days ago and now I created guts to write you some few words because I really enjoyed the fic. Eames and Arthur are amazing (you wrote them so well xD) and the situations made my heart hurt.

I was freaking out thinking that they wouldn't be together and I almost cried 'cause, you know, my feelings were uncontrollable. I had to thank you for this fic and let you know that I really appreciate your work.

I'm not too good with words when I have to describe my emotions - in english is yet more difficult - and because of that I apologize for the mistakes I made and for the few words. Anyway, you did a great work here. Thankyou very much (again xD).

This chapter broke my heart, seriously. But I liked it anyway - am I a masochist? xD
Okay, it's better shutup. I'm going to write the third review \o\

I liked the way you worked the relationship of them and I felt the pain in my chest because i really really love them and your fic is lovely (yeah, you have half blame for the pain that I felt xD).

I adore this story! I wish they had put it in the movie thank you so so much for posting it!

I really like your style and the way you torture Cobb due to his assumptions :) Nice ending too :)

Fantastic. Flipping fantastic.

My mind's a mess right now after reading this so forgive me for the horrible (lack of) order.

Characters:

Oh my bloody God. You depicted the characters so well! It was believable, I could picture the actors acting this out. Every word, every action. I'm a bit anal and orderly so I'll start with Arthur. Dear old Arthur, he was...movie script perfect. Really. You truly depicted his need-for-control, orderly, a bit anal, somewhat prickly and pricky kind of personality. I loved it! Cobb, though somewhat minor in this, acted as the perfect story teller in a sense. He pushed the story when and where needed, as well as adding humour. Although the movie didn't depict much humour from Cobb I think pre- and/or even post- movie (if there were prequels or sequels) Dom would very much be more or less your version of the character. Perhaps a little less crude...but I do like this crude Cobb. And Eames, darling, darling Eames. God I love him. And yes, he is, well, bloody gorgeous. He sounds ridiculously British, because he is! But I know for some it can be a bit difficult capturing and effectively and successfully portraying that stereotypical suave, British charm that we all know Eames possesses. We didn't get to see/hear much from Eames in the movie and I think your insight into what Eames's mind is probably more or less true. A bit egotistical, a bit cocky and yet at the same time, teaming with unnoticed insecurities. Mostly about his Darling. I thought it very clever how you included text messages in your fic. Personally I thought that while Eames may be a texter, Arthur didn't seem to be. Then I thought, well, he's not going to just outright call Eames, so he'll just humour him.

Plot/Fic:

The plot was well thought out, no parts were rushed or droned on, and lacking or too much. The story flowed well, I didn't find myself thinking "The fuck is going on?", I wasn't lost, it was easy to follow. It made me want to read more. I admit, I kind of lost it at the last chapter. I ended up tearing up...a bit. Just a bit. No waterfalls. A few wet tissues but that's it really. The emotions were there, believable, real. Normally, I'm a hardcore "THERE HAS TO BE AT LEAST ONE SEX SCENE. PER CHAPTER." Kind of gal but this, I totally forgot about sex. Your writing just overpowered my mind, in a good way. The grammar, the vocabulary, the style of writing was well done. It all suited and changed to whomever spoke, thought and acted very quickly, leaving no traces of you still thinking about a previous character while typing dialogue for another.

Overall:

A great read. Flirty, easy going humour, adorable banter and an emotional roller coaster jam packed into one. Plus one very poor, presumptuous Cobb. Two thumbs up (Arthur's arse? Sorry, couldn't help myself) and also added to my favourites stories.

P.S. Is 'spiffing' a real word? I've never heard of it, if so, is it British? If so, are you British? If not, then wowza, you sure can type like one. Again, look back at the character review.

P.P.S. I am so sorry! I just realised how long this review was and then I realised I tend to drone on a bit. So I'll stop now. NOW.

This is such an incredible story. I absolutely adore your writing style and I only wish I could be half the writer you are. But seriously, I love how you characterized Eames and Arthur, you made them so incredibly perfect for each other! and I actually did start to tear up at the end when Eames got on the train, and it is very rare that I cry whilst reading a fanfiction.

Bravo, this was by far the best Arthur/Eames I've read. :)