loved it

i fking cried throughout the whole sotry, especially chapter 9

This is bloody amazing

mkay nvm my prediction that Charlie did something is wrong...

but the title still scares me, even more since it continues...

mkay judging by the hint, Charlie fking Weasley is gonna do somethimg to Harry, am i rite or am i rite?.

nvm you cant respond-

fking adorable, i cant-

I know you said that English isn't your first language but if you had not said anything I don't think anyone could tell otherwise. As for this chapter amazing and hysterical at times. You are an amazing author and I love this story! Keep up the awesome work!

This is the first time in a long time that I have come across a Veela mate story for Harry and Draco that I immediately loved reading. It's funny and very catchy! Keep up the great work!

I love it!

So I finished this story. I thought the story was pretty good despite its shortcomings. Towards the end the chapters grew very choppy and some sentences made little sense due to grammar issues. Outside of grammar there was some decidedly sexist moments that made the story less enjoyable. Whether intentional or not these moments set an uncomfortable undertone that wasn't broken until the last 9 or so chapters. That said there are redeeming aspects of the story, the idea of a Veela Queen and court is fascinating as is Draco (and especially the 1st twins) have royal blood. The fighting scene was wonderfully executed, compared to other authors I've read, and the guilt Harry felt was gut-wrenching. Overall the story was a good read and was no where near a waste of time. If I had to rate it I'd give it a 3 overall.

Rarely do I stop reading halfway through a chapter to comment and yet here we are. I enjoy the idea behind this story and was really excited by it. However then I read that part that basically inferred that women are the subs of society and cringed. I powered through however but then I read this "you've gotten far more graceful in the way you walk and more feminine and beautiful since your birthday." So... men can't be graceful? Like you realize some football players have taken classes like (or similar to) ballet so they came be more nimble (aka graceful) on their feet. I will try to read more of this story but the blatant sexism is annoying at best.

1. This chapter is kind of catcalling/sexual abuse in a nutshell. The shit us ladies put up with..
2. I’m still mad about the ‘submissivefemale’ thing, and the fact that you portray Harry as so helpless. US LADIES CAN BE TOTAL BADASSES, AND DONT ALWAYS NEED ‘SOME MAN’ TO DEFEND US!
3. You made a metaphor, comparing a males screaming to a banshee who had lost her makeup. So us women are so makeup obsessed that we loose it without some pretty powder? *slaps u*

So, I really liked dis, until it inferred that WOMEN HAS TO BE THE SUBMISSIVE MEMBERS OF THE SPECIES, AND THAT WE NEED SOME MAN CHASING AFTER US. HISSSSSS! WOMENZ CAN BE DOMINANT AF.

this story was overall very good and I enjoyed reading it XD
sometimes difficult to read, and some facts or part were wrong or an error. but overall well done! and thank you xxx

Harry's magic went chaotic, Voldemorts ash would have been blown away. and if Harry died... who would free the younger students from the C.O.S.

some of those thing the boy thought at the end to hide their erections could be rather sexy lol.

Oh, and naughty Harry drinking wine!