Reviews for Benefits Package
Amanda3271 chapter 3 . 5/17
Nathan really is a naughty boy...….
arsenamcintire2015 chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
beautiful
Zombie D chapter 2 . 11/17/2016
It's too much. I love this!
LillyHalliwell chapter 8 . 6/10/2015
Awh glad they became more than friends! I expect Duke to be gloating about it now.
charmed4fiction chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
This was superb!
sophowee chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
OMGG SUCH A GREAT STORY! I've just become obsessed with Naudrey and I'm so glad I found you because you are a awesome writer and this fic was pretty much perfect! Off to read the other ones of yours now haha
quisinart4 chapter 8 . 11/10/2012
Hot and awesome! And Nathan taking the time to say a proper ILY before he got down to the sexy business was so perfect and in character *swoon*! I love them just being together, finally on the same page and realizing they're both cuddlers hehe. I would have loved it I'd they'd planned on tormenting Duke on Monday though :D Though really they should thank him!

Thanks so much for the awesome story! It's so hard to find well written Nathan/Audrey smut, and especially with plot to go with it so thanks for this, it's one of my favorites! :D
quisinart4 chapter 7 . 11/10/2012
(With such a strong emotion bubbling inside of her, she felt exposed. Like anyone walking down the street would be able to look at her and see right through her. It was a terrifying feeling. No one should be able to look through her so easily, except for Nathan. He had always been able to see through her like she was made of glass.)

I just really love this insight into Audrey because it's so true. I think one of the reasons she's so difficult when it comes to admitting her feelings,'especially as powerful as love, is how easy it is for everyone to notice, it's not something that can be hidden like her other thoughts and emotions.

Her being the first to blurt out the ILY was epic! And him saying "Parker" in between her rambling was spot on. Plus makeout on the couch? Yes please! But as a half-naked Nathan did to Audrey, please lead the way to the bedroom ;)
quisinart4 chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
Duke and his evil ways! Well, those two needed the help in this case! I love you bringing up the Rev's daughter again, and hilarious how a little jealousy sometimes helps more than hurts ;) So glad Audrey wine up and came to her realization that she at least has to try and e with Nathan for real!
quisinart4 chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
Aww poor Nathan! The realization hitting him as he takes in the nught that feels so comfortable and like being at home with her,'it's too much! I'm glad he's assessing his feelings and trying not to spook her, but also realizing it's hurting him to be with her and not be with her how he wants. :( he wants more!
quisinart4 chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
Hottttt! Hot hot! But I love the little moment where she can't help herself and tells him the temperature of the water because that's just what she does for him! So sweet. :)
quisinart4 chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
(Nathan was incredibly thorough, paying attention to every inch of her body and staring at her with a look bordering on reverence that made her feel like a goddess. )

*SWOON*! I love Audrey not spilling the secret that Nathan can feel her to Evie because it does feel like something private between them. I love Nathan daydreaming at the meeting and not being able to get his mind off Audrey and all sorts of possible seduction scenarios hehe. The whole part about him amazed he can give up control to her when he's always so in command of his life is very telling to just how much be cares about her. Love his guilt there because he feels more for her than he's letting on, but glad he's going to try and evoke those feelings from her too!
quisinart4 chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
(Nathan narrowed his eyes. "Parker, I think decoupage night with you would be the most stressful event of my life.")

Lol Oh! I forgot all about Nathan and decoupage from s1 haha, thanks for the callback.

Love Duke putting his plan into action - sometimes fate needs a little push :)
quisinart4 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
(It was amazing to her, just how much power she held over him. In a way it was oddly liberating. While everything in her life had tumbled apart around her, here was a place she had control.)

Hottt! And I loved that line describing him as "over six feet of lean muscle" because UM YES that he is! Can't wait to read about how they face each other in the daylight and how the arrangement works out. Great writing!
geminigurl89 chapter 8 . 10/26/2012
This is a really great story!
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