I liked when he got to spend time with Ironhide!
Aaawwww...

Oh, yes! This is going to be good...
Ironhide, you must protect him at all costs, as if he was your own son. ...

Aawwwww...

Aaawwww... Jazz got to hold Bee...

This is a great story. Thanks for writing it.

Hell yeah I want a sequel gah damn that was a good story

this is so cute! i whant to know if bumblebee is prime son but its cute and i love it !

Dude, you really should write some more to go with this! It would be awesome! Kinda like your own mini seires! Please!

Im enjoy this story i little too much. its soo cute. cus baby bee.

Question: Is Elita a real character or made up? Never heard of her.

This story is awesome!

THAT WAS SO AMAZING

Hello again,

I had once again, finished reading the entire book for "The Little One". I was actually hoping that the first series was longer. For me, finishing at chapter 13 for this series is more like a prologue book than the main if you know what I mean? But then again, I am a avid reader who enjoys longer chapter to keep me going.
This again, my friend - was worth my time reading! I really love the family drama. How Optimus Prime and Elita tried so hard not to let Bumblebee traumatise and getting snatched from evil Megatron. I love the way you portray innocent baby Bumblebee and his comprehension being so little! It really suites him. I also like seeing Bumblebee growing up.
I have half a mind of writing a story of a agent looking after a baby Bumblebee for experimentation. But, I had bigger plans swarming in right now.

The way you portray the Autotobots parents and their very core weakness of loosing their dearest sparkling really does sing throughout the whole storyteller! I really enjoyed the adventure! The only tiniest bit of my criticism, is that you could have Megatron clicking his fingers/pincers (claw like) menacingly at poor Bumblebee. It's just like with the actual movie when Megatron tried to operate poor Sam Witwicky in T2 (Transformers 2) alive.

Did I say you're one of the most inspiring author on your second sequel? If not, I believed that you are! Somehow, your words for storytelling really drift the readers to a brand new world and understood it. I was thinking to start a crossover for Transformers and would have asked you to be my beta. Cause, I was skating over your beta profile to see what you know of my second fandom and it is there!

I will PM you about it. This idea had been eating me since I watched the latest comic movies for the last two weeks! :)

GIVE MAH SAMMY A SQUEALLLL

XOXOXOXOXOXOX Sammy

Awww, poor Bumblebee, at least he's with Optimus again.

...*turns to a random Decepticon*You. Made. Him. SAD.

This was a very good story. I'm surprised by the little amount of reviews. This was far too amazing to only have a hundred reviews. Nice job! I look forward to the sequel. Keep up the amazing work.