Hey, so not bad story so far. My only deal is the ammo you were calling ‘saber ’ rounds. It’s actually Sabot rounds. They’re a type of Armor piercing round. Usually they are smaller than the barre of the gun, so they require balancing to exit the barrel properly. The benefit of this is they move faster and have a smaller point of impact. Anyway, didn’t know if you knew that part.

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I still hat the fact that they took her powers away for some bullshit reason.

Would the matrix of leadership help?

Love this sweet awesome work

every time I read this story, this epilogue always gets me. I'm crying soo much.

Jaaaaaaaazzzzzzzz :D
Actually it all went down scientifically the way I expected... just not written out that way... if that makes any sense lol. I expected at the very least for her bond to be restored when Sentinel used her as a conduit. But I suppose from an authors pov that would be way to convenient and totally ruin canon as far as timing of events goes. What you did was better! And Sunnys reaction was priceless XD
THANK YOU for making it a happy ending. *contented sigh*
Sabi2~
p.s. I went and pushed the back button again writing this...

Hehehe. *applauds* Well Done! :D. I think that says it all.
I'm actually glad there isn't a sequel. I mean you basically wrote 3 stories all combined as one anyway. The sense of completion here is wonderful. And now I can catch up on real life again ha! *sheepishly scratches back of head*
I shall return to read more! Just maybe not right away ;D. . :P

Sabi2~

ROFL! I'm sorry... but Yellowstone? Hahahahaa... I grew up near there and it is my family's favorite place to vacation so I'm so familiar with it I could be a tour guide! lol... but the image of mechs trying to navigate the geyser basins without sinking in or ruining the boardwalk... XD

*slaps palm on forehead* I'm almost with Sunny here hahahahaha! All this time it's been "no we don't have kinky robot sex" lol... I mean. I know this isn't close to that (at least for Cat) but the way it all rolled off the page...XD oh man... I really hope she gets some of that bond back! And I think it's sweet in a way that she doesn't want him to use his holo-form. What's the standard for those anyway? I noticed some authors rely heavily on them but they are almost nonexistent in the movies (again, I have a lack of exposure to the tranformers-verse).
And on another side note (I actually had this all typed up the other night and hit the back button instead of the submit button in my sleep deprived stupor...which is why this is several chapters later...) but I love Maggie and Glenn sightings LOL.
Anyway... ffnet android app saves my reviews for when I reconnect to the Internet (lucky me) and I haven't finished this chapter but I couldn't hold back anymore haha. Laters!
Sabi2~

*whistles*
... yea, no words to describe the awesomeness that is your story weaving lol...

P.S. it's really fun binge reading a story that took years to write. Your authors notes are epic :D

I'm a bit ticked that you let Jazz go... but I'm still in it for the Catswipe lol. but Jaaaaaaaazzzzzzzz... uuug haha.

just so you know... I am full on addicted to this story. like... procrastinating sleep and foregoing regular TV shows. lol...

So she evolved from spoiled brat to raging bitch. Also, she’s underage. I’d love to know how the government can legally keep her parents from forcing her to stay with them if she’s hiding the truth from everyone. It’d be a major legal battle. It’s unrealistic that she just packs it up and takes off without any protest on their end.

Honestly, I’m still trying to figure out how her home life sucks so bad. Okay, so both her parents work. Um ... so? I knew a lot of kids growing up whose parents worked to put food on the table provide their children with a comfortable life. That’s not neglect. It was necessity.

So, her parents nag her to be more responsible and think of the future? Again, not neglect. Concerned parents who want her to be a functioning adult who can live on her own.

I dunno, maybe there’s supposed to be more to it, but I haven’t seen it. In comparison, Sam’s parents are way worse than Catherine’s. If there is more to this “neglect”, I’m afraid you didn’t portray it very well because Catherine frankly comes across to me as being a bit of a drama queen and rather spoiled. Her parents and best friend don’t pay attention to her so she throws a tantrum and runs away. Not particularly mature of her. I think her parents are on to something when they tell her to grow up.

Okay, to be fair, she’s a teenager and teenagers tend to be emotionally unstable psychopaths. But she keeps switching back and forth from mature and responsible to raging toddler, and I honestly can’t tell whether it’s deliberate or just a poor excuse to get her away from her home. She should have just stayed with the Bots to start with.

Anyway, aside from my dislike of Catherine’s self-centered behavior, the story itself isn’t too bad so I’ll keep reading, if only to find out whether or not she actually grows up.