That last line was so cute! I WAS SQUEALING SO HARD!

cute funny and cunning

Oh, that was absolutely adorable! I can SO see Break lying to watch the stars even though he can't see! It's so much like him! /It must be why I love him so much/ They were both so much in character and this was so fun to read! It made me laugh out loud at the end. Your writing is very good! I'd love to read more from you

Very well written! I loved the ending, it was really very cute.

Awe it was so super cute lol!

That was so much like them - and that made this so good! I really enjoyed reading this D

LOLOLOLOLOL

I loved this, it was so funny~

Poor lady, I wonder if Break creeped her out? XD

Great job.