This was one of the sweetest things I've ever been witness of. Gorgeous.

That was so freaking cute I never imagined the two like that!#

That was absolutely adorable! Loved it so much, just like all of your other Sugarless Gum stories 3 Keep writing!

Ahahahah too adorable! Marceline couldn't resist _! Another cute short story. Loving them more and more 3 thank you again!

Perfection. Perfection in story form 3

Vienna Teng, nice. I approve. Wonderful snippet of their lives, as always. You always do a great job of portraying them very, er, heart-breakingly lovely.

This is really good! I love seeing Marceline turn into a sap. :D

D'aww, this was just too cute. And totally perfect for a story explaining how they met, or just a story in general. Once again, you've done it. Such a great little tale here, with just the right amount of sad and cute. Reluctant Marceline is the best thing ever, by the way.

so sweet

: AW! Poor PB!

At first I was worried that Marceline being protective would be out of character, but I'm impressed. Sugary sweet and not a moment out of character. My hat's off to you.

Your writing skills are amazing! I'm serious, I stalk you and read all of your stories. Every one of them is SOOO GOOD! Please continue writing! And also, could we have a multi-chapter story sometime? I just can't get enough of your awesomeness.

Oh my god, this is so amazing. I loved the characterization, the way it looked through Marceline's eyes, how Bubblegum behaved... I love it so much when people dip into the darker sides of these characters and it actually comes up good. Bah. I don't know what to say. Just that this was amazing, and I will definitely be checking to see if you've written more Adventure Time or any other fanfictions for stuff I know. :-)

Oh, God. Can I just marry you? Blast it all. This is fantastic. So lovely it's painful.

That was too cute. I love your writing, and this is an awesome take on how they could have met.