Cute!

Hmmm... I liked the beginning and middle but I thought their explanation of why they lied was not good enough. It did not explain why they showed up at the desk in the first place or when they first saw him to come up with the lie. You dont randomly decide to lie about being tourist with your friends/lovers. Also are the all in a relationship? The scene in the cafe made me think so, but that just complicates the lying storyline because all of them would have to have decided to add him to their relationship and lie. Maybe if you did some sort of scenes where each of them sees him or where customers all say they were recommended by him to their stores and it makes them curious. Another thing that confused me was right at the beginning when they ask if cloud had been to their stores they recommend going to those places even though it would make their lies found out faster. Did they want to get caught? Anyways just some ideas rattling in my head after reading this story and you asked for reviews so I thought I would mention this.

I loved it. I think no matter which setting this fivesome is placed it, the story'll always be so wonderful. Thanks for this fic!

Aw, that was so freaking cute!

Awww! This is great!

Jesus Christ, four boyfriends? I wouldnt mind that *gives a perverted giggle then shuts up*

Love the story! Poor Cloudy though, getting upset and stuff... Love the ending XD

I am spazzing out with giddiness right now. This fic was SO FREAKKIN ADORABLE!

Five gorgeous, sexy, manly, delicious men together at once? Throw me a box of Kleenex 'cuz I might just die of bloodloss!

Ack, still spazzing out at the cute! X3

Well I'm hooked now. I really wish you would've made this a multi-chapter because it's freakin' adorable.

I haven't read a story this good in over three years. I mean...seriously. Wow. I'm can't wait for more of your updates, including your Thieves and Beggars. :)

You're definitely one of my new favorite authors.

Cute. I normally don't like group pairings like this but... you made it work. Nicely done. 3 I like the idea honestly and it was very cute. *nods* Though I feel bad for Cloud kind of.. being played like that at first.

Adorable. I love the characters and the situation. Makes me wish I could have a five way relationship lol.

Oh my gods I loved this! Sooooo cute! And its really well written I think. The ending was adorable too I loved this whole thing! 3

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AWWWW! LOVE!

Oh wow, SO cute. I mean, REALLY well done. I seriously love ASGZC... THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE. :3 It was a simple story, but you put it together really well. From the average day beginning to the happy ending, it was adorable. :3 YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE LIKE THIS. :) :3

Cloud is so funny & cute, I love his reactions to everything & you kept it constant throughout.

I'm surprised that Cloud was so shocked to find out they like him after all that flirting!

Oh my Gosh; this was SO awesome. I absolutely ADORED this. Not only is ASGZC hard to find, but this was...SO CUTE. 3 Agggh, I can't explain. By Wednesday, I'll give you a wonderful review full of fangirling, I promise you. :) PLEASE KEEP WRITING. 3 3

Very cute and well written.