great you gave her a chainsaw.

Hey, can someone make some fanart of Megatherium?

It took me a while to get to this theory but I got, so here it is my theory:
the four evil digimon that are under the command of Malevomon are represented as four of the seven deadly sins.

Gulutomon Gluttony
Envidamon Envy
Cediamon Sloth
Iramon Wraith

Literally the Best Digimon Story i've EVER read in my life
I'm a little late but i wish i was there to support you from the start its beautiful Thank you for Writing this wonderful story!

I want to read this, I really do, but the grammar mistakes and errors in writing style kill any desire. Can’t even finish the first chapter. If this gets a rewrite, it might be worth reading.

Great they got a pot-bellied dwarf, a string less puppet, and a bear cub made out of vanilla ice cream. Good luck

I can't believe Ranamon went diva on them XD.

This fanfiction is one of the most popular in the digimon section and its not hard to see why. Even after so long it's still an enjoyable reading.

Saw this while browsing, not gonna read cause I don't like Digimon, but the 100 & 1,000,000, 10/10 stars

1.000.000 words exactly and 100 chapters? Wow, that's the precision medal!

takuya could have won if zoe hadn't interfered

This was by far the best story ever! I would love to read more of your stories but it seems like this is the only one, Please do more was so emotional it made me obsessed with this story that I keep coming back to read it over and over again. Keep up the good work and whereever you are I hope you are doing well Absolutely in Love with this!

Thank you for the story, it was one heck of a ride.

Thank you for such an amazing story my friend.

I enjoy how right at the start of the chapter, you introduce a love rival to Zoe (even if she's not fully aware of it just yet).
Opposites tend to create some very interesting conflicts. You have Zoe, the good girl-next-door who uses her good-hearted nature, as well as her selfless acts to win Takuya's heart. And then you have Beautymon who uses her natural sexuality to entice Takuya. Obviously, Beautymon is attracted to Takuya sexually... even though he's only 14, so it's kinda awkward. However, i really hope that deep down, Beautymon does have feelings for Takuya as Zoe does, so that they are both fighting for the same affection instead of one fighting for feelings and the other one for his body.
I will admit, Beautymon does have a dirty mind with Takuya, which definitely catches the reader by surprise. Whetehr it's a good thing or bad thing remains to be seen, but some of the things she says, i never expect it.

That was cute how Takuya was concerned for Zoe's well being. But i commend you for not making it too intimate. It only makes sense that their relationship will continue to develop throughout the story. And having him think that he can "ressurect" Zoe with a Prince Charming kiss was a hilarious choice. Having her wake up beforehand was awesome as well. And I like how you didn't make it too slapstick and stuck with awkwardness. Their banter together was very enjoyable to read.

Now going right back to Beautymon, you hit a positive earlier with her in the begining of the chapter with Takuya. However, with her first interaction with Zoe, I believe it felt like a dud. Immeditely, Beautymon is appalled and disgusted with Zoe, even calling her ugly and. That is just plain right nasty and cruel. And she calls this to her right in front of everyone, in front of Takuya, Swiftmon, and Zoe herself. I think Takuya would've just stood up for her right there because of their friendship. But Beautymon's insults make her a very bad character, which is a shame beacuse I think she could've been someone that we love to hate. But instead, we just hate her.
I would've prefered that she acted all nice and friendly with everyone watching, but then shows her nasty side to Zoe and Zoe only, that way, only she would know her bad side, while everyone else just sees Beautymon's charade.

There is a clear misunderstanding between rivalry and being enemies. Rivals both want the same thing, and although both shall perform different methods to get what they want, there is still an underlying respect for each other, despite the many MANY clashes both would encounter.
Enemies, both want to clearly destroy each other to get what they want, no matter what. And I feel that's where your problem with Beautymon lies: she reads as Zoe's ENEMY not her RIVAL. And that relationship doesn't work once you remember that both her and Zoe are supposed to be fighting on the same side (for now).
Zoe and Beautymon both want Takuya, and they can despise each other for that. But both have to respect each other because both are fighting to save the digital world.

I can go on about that, but I don't want this review to be all negative. You definitely played Zoe's jealousy well. The whole "carrying to the briefing room" may have come off as more "romantic" than "friendly". But I'm glad that Zoe was able to smile again.

Interesting introduction of Eldestmon and Malevomon. (although it would've read better without Beautymon's insults at Zoe. Reminder of the whole Respect and Rivaly issue)

And great backstory, although I think it would've been better if you actually written out the whole thing as a flashback. It would've been very intriguing to see what kind of digimon Arcimon was before he turned bad. Explore his relationship with Eldestmon (their frienships as well as their quarrells).
There is so much I want to know about the bad guy because when you humanize a villain, it makes them that much more connective with the audience, instead of a "bad guy we must destroy because he's evil" trope. I wanted to see his flaws, his tragic downfall, and the slowly losing of hope to save him from Eldestmon's POV.
I think you missed a great opportunity for character development with Malvomon's intro.

(Again, Beautymon's remarks just make me cringe, and the feels so unwarranted.)

I do like Zoe standing up for herself, but supporting Zoe just feels too easy. Like it doesn't have the impact as you could've had if Beautymon wasn't so public and frequent with her insults.

Sadly since it is a common theme, I might have to mention it every review. But I'll try to limit it.

Here is a 10 for you: When Eldestmon was scolding both Zoe and Beautymon, you had Beautymon look at him "innocently asking, "you say something boss?"
It's that kind of two-face charm that makes Beautymon so appealing. She's all friendly and beautiful to everyone else, but she only shows her bad side to Zoe. I hope you continue to play that more as Zoe would feel more victimized because not only is she on the recieving end of Beautymon's bad side, but it would hurt even more if no one believed her.

Great way to end it, fianlly giving the two heroes a mission that would put them on the path to help save the digital world. I feel many of these chapters are going to be deja vu. but I hope to read some form of originality to it.

Overall, this chapter would've been great but missed opportunities and poor character display make it rather hard to enjoy. Your previous chapters have been stronger, you still do great with descriptions and action. But continue to work on character development and interactions.