I honestly thought this was dead. Glad to see you back. Good chapter, too. Good job.

I admit that I had long ago given up hope of this story updating. I actually had to go back and read this from the beginning, since I forgot most of the details. It's a good story, I really enjoyed it. I hope you continue to update this, I'm looking forward to it. Midna is my favorite character in Legend of Zelda, but I admit that I couldn't stand her at first. It was only after saving her life when she changed that I really started to like her. I'm looking forward to seeing how you write that, along with Ava's take on it.

We could take this Mary Sue

and push it somewhere else

Update please!

I love your fic, it's great. I normally don't like OCs in LoZ fics but you're doing a good job, not having a Mary Sue or anything like that, but a real person with faults of their own, so kudos to you. I can't wait to see what's next, keep up the good work!

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Hey, I thought this was dead. Glad to see you back. Nice chapter, it's good to see they struggled with the training. She seems to have some similarities to Midna lol.

I really like this story! Ava feels very real to me and it makes me enjoy the story even more :)
Keep up the awesome work!

Keep it up. I love it.

I LOVE IT, it's long and has a lot of awesomeness, can't believe I never came across this story it's beautiful, please update soon

Liking it so far. Looking forward to the next chapter. *grins*

Please update soon! I love the story. Ava is so tough. I suggest that because Ava is so tough you give her a tough past. Also, are you going to give her ice powers like in the title? If so can you give her fire, earth, wind, and water, as well as ice?

This story is great! Are you gonna update more? I would love to read it and find out what happens!

Man...Poor Ava. Everything seems to be falling apart in front of her...

Sometimes I think Midna deserves a punch in the stomach. (Anyone else agree with me?)

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!