Amazing

Whoa. A lot of surprises in this chapter. Definitely made it worth the wait.

Yay! I'm so glad this story wasnt dropped!

I MISSED YOUUU, omggg jaja great chapterr

This isn’t getting updated anymore, is it? If so, that’s so sad! This is such an amazing fic, and I’m dying to know what happens next. If you ultimately lose inspiration or don’t feel like continuing, could you at least post a chapter just saying how the story ends? It’s so, so incredible. Beautiful work!

*sigh* the best fics are often uncompleted. It’s been nearly two years. I hope you update soon :)

So, so amazing. Can’t wait to see what happens next :)

Dude, this story is amazing. I binge read this so fast... Good job on getting a diploma!
I don't want to be one of those people, but pls update? Everything is so good, the characters are original, the descriptions are amazing... It'd be great for this story to continue!

Update please

Wow. This is the best written MLP fanfic I've ever read, and it's now my absolute #1 favorite of all time. Seriously. I discovered this fic a couple days ago, and since then I've read and reread it several times. It's just that good. The plot is so original and beautifully constructed. Your OCs are brilliant, complex characters and, for the most part, super likeable, but you've also managed to keep the mane six in character. I love how you write Rainbow Dash. You capture her character and brash, confident, loyal, and sometimes soft nature so brilliantly. I also love how you so beautifully show how her and Linden's (the first mlp oc I absolutely 100% adore) relationship evolves. (GOSH THIS IS SUCH A GOOD FANFIC LIKE WHAT!) This story is so gripping. I'm dying to know what happens next! (Seriously, I NEVER leave reviews- this is my first time leaving one ever- but please don't abandon this fic! It's been nearly a year! The suspense is killing me!) I love this story to bits and I'll continue to check everyday for an update. If you ever read this, I urge you to continue writing, for this story is a work of art, and you are one talented writer!

I can't believe it finally updated! This was one of my favorite fanfictions to read a few years ago, and I was really sad because I thought that it would never be continued. Thank you thank you thank you! I'm so glad I never forgot about this fic, because I love re-reading it! Keep up the amazing work!

Hehehe! I'm just surprised and happy there's an update at all. I honestly forget about a story if I haven't read it in a while. So it's cool seeing this story rise from the barrel and say, "Hey, remember me? I've got that cool plot and fun characterization!" and I say, "Oh, yeah!"

Woot woot! When i saw the update for this chapter i was soooo excited! I've fallen out of the mlp fandom myself, but back when i was still a fan this was my favorite fanfiction! Congratulations on getting your bachelor's in science by the way! I only have an associate's of science but i plan on getting my bachelor's in microbiology, so i have a pretty good idea on how hard you had to work to get it!

It's great to see a new chapter at last. And Rainbow and Linden discovering more of the kingdom's dark secrets made for compelling reading.

...Wow.

I say "This... This isn't being updated anymore, is it?"

And, what happens the very next day?

Update! Seriously, it's great to see the return of this story. We were all afraid you would be leaving on the cusp of a climax - and it's good to see a powerful return. This chapter isn't as meaty as some in the past, but it's understandable that it's been a very long time since you last worked on this (presumably) - but it's still a graceful return. Grammar is spotless as always, the pacing is smooth and the story is progressing nicely.

Honestly, it's amazing to see you're back and all the best for the future.