Great nice

im sorry i love this story but no this story is all about cortexaphan there is no way olivia wouldn't of used her abilitys when the men first got there if she needs peter around like suggested in season 4 she should of used them in the house i just feel like it doesnt make sense i understand u wanted to write she lost the baby but that just doesn't make sense

I love all your stories. I have followed this story from the start. It will remain a favorite of mine. It was well written and exciting all the way through. And as much as I would love to see the kids struggle with powers in a sequel, I believe the story ended well. :) I look forward to reading your other stories.

Signed,

K.

:')

great ending

I loved this fanfic sooo much and I'm so sad that it's over now :(

Great ending. Nice to see the Bishop tribe coming into fruition. Looking forward to more fics from u ladies!

Perfect ending! :)

How sweet. :) I really hope you will choose ti write a sequel.

obviously, I'm only part way into the story, but a few thoughts so far. Please don't take these as criticisms,because I'm actually enjoying the story so far. These are just a few thoughts as I'm going along.

1. having discovered who the babies parents are, you'd think they'd go and find their birth certificates. This would tell them exactly how old the babies are, and what their legal names are. If they adopt the babies, they are of course entitled to legally change the kid's names to Maddox and Rowan Bishop, but in the meantime, that's not actually their names.

2. Red wine doesn't get chilled. White wine gets chilled, red wine is always kept at room temperature. I have no idea why.

Like I said, I'm enjoying the story and look forward to seeing where you take it.

Another beautifully written chapter... I cannot wait to see where you take chapter 23! Please update soon!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~

P.S. I think you two meant to say choked instead of chocked. Choked has only one 'C' in it...

Glad that things worked out & that Rachel intervened. Happy family makes me smile.

Awwww yay happy families :)

wow 3 updates in 12h YOU ROCK I have to say this is one of my fav stories ever and I really enjoy reading it..each chapter is very well written..can't wait for the last chapter and a new story from you guys ;) just saying!Thank You!

What have you done? Peters leaving! No! More please, I have to know what happens!

oh man...methinks Astrid's gonna go hunting for a certain chess piece. because I doubt Olivia would go after him since she thought he left her because of her being weak...maybe Broyles will knock sense into Peter...

poor Peter...poor Olivia...poor babies.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I'm crying...i hope everything works out with them and not be seperated. Can't wait to see what happens next